WAH! I don't want this! family getting mixed up in the world of the book gives me bad feelings! Keisuke was bad enough, but now the mom, NO! WAH!*SOB*SOB*I don't want to read this anymore! But to show my dedication and loyalty up till now I will, but in return, KEEP MIAKA'S FAMILY OUT OF THE UNIVERSE OF THE FOUR GODS! family ruins the whole romantic atmosphere(pout, pout), PLEASE TAKE THEM OUT! at least atke the mom out, i can at least handle keisuke.

Sincerly,

Kamiko

NO!NO!NO!NO! I would wait a little while to comment again, but I have to speak up, family meeting lover is cute for a while, but this is too far,Keisuke going into the book, no, I would want their special world to be reserved for only her and her warriors, not brother and miaka's mother jumping to conclusions and catching onto the lying, this is going in the polar opposite direction I want. I suppose I'll admit that I'm mostly put out about this because of you foreshadowing miaa's potential danger with the other gang koji mentioned before, which I really hope goes onto the actual story and isn't miss leading. And so you'll notice and read this log comment-READ TO MAKE STORY BETTER!

OMG!OMG!OMG! I was gonna wait till I finished it all, but I can't contain my exited giddiness anymore. I love this story more than you will ever know and I exremely want something to happen with what koji and shing were taking about with the other bandits and their new leader and miaka being pron to possible kidnappings, don't hate me for wanting to read this type of stuff and for it to happen, it's just the stuff I absolutely love in story's. I can't remember everything I've thought were good ideas and details you've provided in these chapters, but for sure you are a genius writer and I LOVE YOU!(don't get me wrong, I mean that strongly as a fan love)Please write more and I will be eternally greatful!

great read! fully realized and plausible take on this pairing, solid characterization, and way to give kouji and the yuuki family a chance to shine. that, and a deliciously smouldering tasuki - what's not to like?

please tell me this story isn't abandoned? dying to read on.

Hey KL,

I just want to say that the new ending to this chapter is awesome! XD It's much smoother and more...informative...yes, informative, than the other ending that you had originally posted.

Much Love,

BlackHawk

wow! you're a really good writer!, the story was a little slows at first but then picked up very well, I am so thankful to you, when I usually find something really, super, mea, awsome to read, it is either a short story or in fanfictions, case the writer has few chpaters ad never updates, but you have like 27! I've seen some of your favorite story's and found you've got pretty good taste in stories, or in fushigi yugi for the most part. I encourage you to keep writing(preferably fushigi yugi tasukixmiaka romances),YOU ARE AWSOMELY GREAT!

E! Stopping just before the best part! I love this story, I NEED to read the rest! Please continue it soon XD

COOL

Hi KittyLynne,

"...DEVISED by L. Frank Baum!"

(in case other readers have missed this, this is said by Miaka's mother when she commented about the UoTFG upon arrival)

Seems it is hinted at this stage of your story that Tasuki was beginning to realise his world was an imaginary realm given in some kind of novel or literature!

This story is beautifully and INTELLIGENTLY written. You have done an excellent job in plot setting and character development. Throughout the chapters, for more than an occasion, Tasuki had demonstrated his sensitivity, intelligence, decisiveness and even delicacy (which is well hidden inside Tasuki himself, intentionally or unconsciously)! So to me, it makes perfect sense that Tasuki is able to find out something at a very early stage by himself (and it will be interesting to see how the story continues)

KittyLynne, there are bits of hints and information scattered all along the storyline which I suspect that these little pieces will eventually tie up together to complete the jigsaw. (I gotta remember that Yui's note was in the pouch on the underside of Tasuki's belt !)

Please write more! I cant bear to wait any longer!

I recently decided to re-watch Fushigi Yuugi and in doing so realized that when I watched it the first time, I hadn't actually read any fanfiction for it. So after several days of trudging my way through badfic after badfic, I found this little gem. Your Tasuki is -perfect- which, as he is my favorite, has caused me to eagerly work my way through this lovely fic. I really do hope you continue with this soon as you've proven to me that there are good fics out there for this series. You'll have to forgive me for not giving you the shining review that you deserve, but I haven't actually been to sleep yet since yesterday as I found that I just couldn't stop reading until I had run out of chapters. I haven't had a bout of self induced insomnia that I've enjoyed more :)

To A.H

Sorry to leave this as a review, but I had no other way to reply. Just wanted to thank you for the heads up on the non word 'irregardless'. Don't know what I was thinking when I typed that...^_^;

Thanks again, and thanks for reading!

Every good wish,

KittyLynne

The following review has been submitted to: The Promise: A Tasuki and Miaka

Love Story Chapter: 3

From: A.H )

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Irregardless is not a word

Irregardless is not a word

First of all I must say, your literary prowess is simply magnificent. Your words breathed life and made this tale as if it were real. Your vocabulary surely surpasses my own and I found every chapter to be as enthralling and engulfing as the last. I am most certainly glad that I have had the pleasure of reading this fanfiction. I commend you on your obvious skill and your uncanny way of capturing the reader's attention and holding it hostage until the end. I wish you much luck, love, and peace. I will also keep my eye out for the next chapter, for I cannot wait to see what entails. It was a joy to read 'The Promise: A Tasuki and Miaka Love Story' and I cannot wait until I see it updated. May your writer's muse serve you as Nyan Nyan serves Taiis-kun. Best wishes to you and all...

-Alias: Anastastia-

Oh yay! I was really hoping that we were going to run into another warrior, either reincarnated or still living, for some more variety. Soi is not the first I would have expected, so that's awesome! A great surprise. (Is Amiboshi still alive in this one? I don't remember which OVA he left at...and he's one of my 3 favs! I'm hoping they'll run into him too) Anyways, it's nice that they've finally made it back to the UOTFG, and I'm really looking forward to when you update BOTH this story and 'Leather and Lace!' Good luck, and please update your profile to let your fans know how it's coming!