This was absolutely the cutest thing I have ever read in this fandom. So very lovely! I adored the interaction between these three.

Cuteeee! Forgive me for flooding you with my nonsense, but you, miss haveearned a favorite author spot.

OMG this is so adorable 3 great job! i loved it :)

Omg, I just couldnt stop smiling when Rai showed up. I LOVED the way he used to cheer Kimiko up and it is definitely obvious he likes her, what with him offering to do laundry with her. That was just too sweet! And howhe added Ninja Fred, I just had to squeal at that part.

For a story that's unedited, its very well written and I spotted no mistakes. Great job :)

Ahhhh... So perfectly adorable. I'm impressed, even without the edits. Nicely done. Keep it up!

~InkWoven

Adorably sweet and fluffy and just puts a smile on my face :)

I quite like your extra attention to detail and because makes me feel more immersed in the scene, I don't think less always is more.

This made me smile A LOT. I especially love the dialogue you put into this, especially the one coming from Clay. The stories I read so far from Xiaolin Showdown gave me a headache, but after reading this, I felt so relieved. At least there's one story out there that's wonderfully written :D

I really liked this. I think you captured their personalities perfectly. If Xiaolin Showdown wasn't a kids show, I guarantee you that Kimiko would he swearing at Omi and the Heylin a lot. Forever Ninja Fred! Loved it!

You had me at Ninja Fred. Btw! My stuffed manatee is named Fred. ;D Anyway, your characterization of Clay, Rai, and Kimiko was spot-on! I wasn't entirely sure if there were supposed to be romantic undertones, but personally, I'm viewing this as a family fic and I absolutely adore it. You have the boys good natured and protective of Kimiko, but with enough regards to know that she can take care of herself. I really enjoyed your fic, I hope you write more!

Oh my gosh I love this story! Its super cute and I love how you wirte. The characters are awesome too. Your right when you say he wouldnt be a jerk to a crying girl. And I love Clay's brotherly protectiveness. This is going to my favorites! :D

Nice story I think you did well with the whole plot

This is sooo cute! :)

Aw! That was cute _ haha