Thoughts on the characters: Written from the viewpoint of Lily, about Scorpius and Rose.

Hmmm... A Scamander and Rose/Lily? But it could be Teddy and Victoire/Rose/Lily, anyone... Hard to say, really. "Cousin" sets it as next-gen, at least. But who they are don't matter very much. It's still beautifully written and captures the dynamics well.

This is wonderful. I'm not a big fan of second person, but heartbreak is so universal (and well written here) that it works. The struggle, the betrayal, the self-doubt, the looking back and realizing the other person's true motives are very realistically portrayed. No grammar/spelling errors that I noticed. Great job!

As far as who's who, I'm guessing Lily Luna has been betrayed by Rose and Scorpius.

Oh, dear, I have no idea who the three protagonists are, haha. Hmm... maybe Rose, Lily, and Scorpius... But only because a lot of people write them as a love triangle! This was an incredibly well written piece, and I adore it! Great job!

This is last of the reviews that you won from the Childhood Memory Competition; congratulations again! If you want to try your hand at another competition that I'm sure you'll do well in, try The MASH Competition. Thank you again for your brilliant entry!

Fantastic work on this. It really makes you want to guess who it is, no?

My guess is Scorpius, Dominique, and Rose being the main character.

Great work, though! :)

Have I told you lately that I love your writing? I know I say it every time I review something of yours, but it's true. XD

Judge # 2 put the review down for the wrong story sorry for confusion! Truthfully she had no idea who this was.

Many did however so I'll decuct a few points but so far 7/10! I'll inform you if ur in top 3! ~ Dark lady marrissa

(Revieving for marrissa gnokawitz's contest)

Short, but sweet. I really liked the story, and it threw me for a loop, as I had almost NO ideas on who the three characters could be. However, I thought it might be a love triangle between Bellatrix Lestrange (The one who's point of view it would be told in), Andromeda Tonks (The cousin) and Ted Tonks (The boy)? Honestly, I'm not too sure. Great job, I really had a tough time trying to figure out the characters.

Hi, i'm judge #3 for the challenge. I couldn't tell who it was exactly, so here's what I know:

1. She's female, duh. :3

2. She's a Slytherin.

3. She's probably a next generation...?

I have no idea, actually. :) I liked the story, but I don't think i can put my finger on who she is.

Really interesting. I was trying to figure out who the three characters were the whole time. My guess on the characters would be; Girl who's point of view we read it from: Lily Luna Potter. Guy: Scorpius Malfoy Girl 2: Rose Weasley. Second guess would be Molly, Teddy, Victoire. Really interesting and great story!

I'd guess Rose, Lily and Scorpius? I'd also guess that Rose is the one who the character is. -hums thoughtfully- Can't think of any other Slytherins who it could be. :L

I was really stumped until I figured out that they were NextGen! And I'm still uncertain. Great job!

I'm guessing the main character is Rose, but I don't really know the others. Perhaps Lily Luna is the cousin?

At a guess, I'd say Scorpius, Lily and Rose, but it could easily be someone else.The Greengrass sisters and Draco Malfoy for example. Keep writing

Seeing as they're slytherin, maybe pansy, draco, and astoria greengrass?