not bad.not bad at all

Amazing. I absolutely loved this. Well written and in character. One of my favorites. Well done. :)

Hello! That was great! I love how Claire seemed sort if conflicted about her with Jake or with Eli. I love your writing!

Great start! Can't wait to see what you do with this story :)

Aww, this made my stomach ache (in a totally good way). And you know you're doing something right with your writing if you make the reader *phsyically* feel something along with emotionally . . . at least in this case lol. Oh, how I miss the Eclare times before everything spiraled out of control. Anyway, keep writing - I love all of your stories!