wtf!this is just from a walk to remember. try to thinkof your own stuff u freakin plagarist

really lyked it! cried multiple times but i still loved it!

Okay, I would just like to say that I read this whole thing about four or five months ago, and loved it so much, I just read it all again in the past three days.

And I loved it just as much the second time around. The plot line to this story was so extremely touching and well-thought-out and can't think of a single chapter that could use editing. Every single twist and turn and Chapter 18: Chasing Dreams brought everything together so beautifully that if there was any possible doubt of creativity in the begin, it's gone now.

And the beginning of Chapter 6: Tonight and the Rest of my Life is absolutely adorable. Love it.

This is officially the best CloudxTifa Chapter Fanfiction I've ever read, congratulations!

... you killed Yuffie, AND CLOUD? WHY?

*sobs uncontrollably*

OMG yea so i just read the chapter before this and i was like hanging on the edge of my seat when riley came home...i was like literally screaming: SHIT GET THE FUCK OUT OF THERE CLOUD! lol yea anyways, you rock

OMG THIS IS SUCH an amazing story...lol i should be doing homework right now...but that can wait

I don't know what to say... It's undiscrible with words... all I can say is that it's the most beautiful story I've ever read in my entire life. You made it possible! The perfect story between Cloud & Tifa real! I've longed for a story like this for such a long time and you made my dream come true. I bow to you, once again, exellent work.

/Kuldian

very cute

of course cloud has to come back to tifa! that's how it works! love the pairing. great story!

~kk

Wonderful story and excellent use of an original idea. Keep up the great work, and i'll keep reading.

The greatest fanfic I've ever read! That was great! I stayed up just to finish this story. Write another one! Pls!

I said it once, and I'll say it again. This IS THE best CLOTI fic ever!

Amazing...

What a fantastic story...

I'm speechless. No wait, I have one thing to say. This is the greatest FF7 fanfic ever written. I loved it!

spain

That was one of the best stories I ever read. At first I didnt understand the title completly but you tied it in so well. I loved the conculusion..

*Tears*

Although you could of had her die too at the end but i think the way you did it left a bigger impact!

I really think that this story is amazing, and it really is. You have made a giant succes out of it, and I must say when I started to read it, it seemed a little boring to start with, but then you got to the deep essence of FFVII, and for that I congratulate you. You have written it so beautifully, and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you come up with many more Fictions, but in a way you don't have to becuase you have prooven your abilities with "The Thin Line Between", so I don't think anybody would doubt in your magnificent writting skills. Well this is getting way too F*'ing long of a review hehe, but best to you.. ;) You rule! and you know it... sincere Kakaroti #4