Reviews for Torn Between Lies
derek chapter 1 . 9/30
lol cloud you just learned that all women even digital ones get what they want
freyja0taku chapter 1 . 3/7/2016
It's so cute and funny! :3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
I would love to see more fan fiction like this about Cloud and Tifa.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
I wish this continued!
jtdarkman chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Lol yea Marlene is definitely on tifas side. Like a mini informant
SilverKnight17 chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
lol nice
Blackshadow390 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
so Tifa... was only acting !
she ie a great actress!

poor Cloud XD
roobaby2011 chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
Just maybe? lol So cute!
rintsukiyomi chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
HAHA! i love it!
KShiki chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
That was quite fun to read! You captured everyone's personalities brilliantly, descriptions etc. It is also rare to read a good short with the length of the story, and had my heart beating at the...'naughty' bits.
jka1 chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Haha Tifa tricked him into staying :D

This was really good :)
Keyblade Princess 13 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
luv it
sorakun9 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
The ending was so funny! Aw Tifa you are just so clever, although Cloud is smart enough to figure out her little plots. I felt bad that he felt so sad and guilty when Tifa cried. but what a good actress she is! Crying out of nowhere, well done. Great story, awesome job!
Swandie chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Tifa could be selfish sometimes XDD
AquaticSilver chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
OMG! This is so freaking adorable! I can't help but smile and grin *like an idiot* here _

Whoa! Aww Cloud, how sweet of him to save up money for their surprise trip _

That would be the best trip ever for the Strife's ;D

Hehe...nice one Marlene, i knew i can count on you! You can control Cloud too...

Aww, yay a hug :3
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