Excellent chapter. Thanks for updating x

Excellent chapter x

Two excellent chapters as a start! Looking forward to more. x

Great beginning so far:) Well, hopefully they will find out who murdered those children...

It's been a long time since I've found a piece of writing that so thoroughly captured my attention. Your research, subtly invoked, serves you well, and your prose is beautifully engaging. So, next chapter soon, I hope?

Best,

Marchwriter