Reviews for Promise Not to Stop When I Say When
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
You wrote this beautifully! Calthazar is the best thing ever really, and I thank you for creating this well written, in character, perfect fic!
Catharmel chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Lovely. I imagine an AU where Balthazar sticks around long enough that Levi!Cas turns decent again, and they end up happy, fighting for the world together. (Sequel?)
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
That was beautiful. Great story!
WhispersInTheShawdows chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
This is fantatsic!
ebonypol chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
I love it! Amazing :D
Antaria chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
From time to time I think to myself: "Screw you, Winchesters"
SweetChi chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
I really enjoyed this! You wrote Balthazar and Castiel very, very well. I hope you consider writing more for them in the future. :)
Werewolf's Oneshots chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Bra. Vo. Bravo. You have no idea how hard it is to get me to read a fanfic from start to finish these days, I'm hardly ever satisfied with what is put up on this website after going through so much nonsense and, to put it bluntly, garbage. This is the opposite of nonsense and garbage.

It's so weirdly amazing having a non-canon pairing that isn't written ridiculously over the top, over sexed, over dramatized. This was so perfect. Everything about it seemed right. I love the subtlety of their relationship in heaven during war, how you explain the differences between the two lovers and most other angels, how even Cas and Balthazar are so different from each other. I love how intimate they were without having sex, and that intimacy lived up to expectations without being smutty or sloppy. They felt perfectly in character through the whole thing, too. The dialogue sounded right, it wasn't cliched or silly in any way. It seemed a little wordy at times, especially for Cas being so very injured, but that didn't at all distract from the story. Their interactions were great. The other characters fit in the story like the right puzzle pieces.

And the wings. I love the thought of wings being so sensitive, and you really kicked it up a notch. The descriptions were fantastic, you painted a beautiful metaphysical picture of the situation and I drank in every word.

In light of Cas's tragic actions in the show, this fic absolutely breaks my heart. It's romantic and fluffy and at the same time sets up for the scene of Balthazar's death perfectly. They are so in character you can still see how the two angels you have written are the same angels in that final moment between the two in the show. It's really sad, and beautiful at the same time.

Okay, hope I didn't gush too much. This fic was just the last thing I was expecting when I flipped through tonight and it really made my evening, thanks so much for writing it. I'd love to see more Supernatural from you someday, though judging by the quality of this fic, I'm gonna have to read your writings on Lost once I finish watching it on netflix.

Happy writing & best wishes,

WerewolfsOne
MaggyStar17 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
It was very cute and sweet, and romantic... and completely awesome. I love it 3
Algazoth chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Nicely done, Cas' desperation comes across just right and how can you not love the multilayered Baltie?
Mithya Aviana Cailin chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
i love this fic. i love balthazar and castiel. i wish there are more fic about their friendship and brotherhood bond.

i'm really sad that balthazar is dead, killed by castiel in the movie. :( :( i'm sad that castiel turn evil god on the brothers. :( :(

this fic is nicely written. so bittersweet. please write more about them. could you also write a genben fic about female castiel and balthazar? :p just a suggestion.
psi-neko chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I really liked this story. It was cool to see what Balthazar may have been doing during the episode and I hadn't thought about another angel bringing the Winchesters back. It was a good point and something that Castiel should have done.

It's really nice to see how Balthazar cares for Castiel and the wondering how Sam and Dean don't realize that Castiel is lying. It's also bittersweet because of what happens to Balthazar.

Great story!
X5 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Absolutly love it!