Perfect little story! Thanks for sharing :)

WOW! This is great, something a little different. I really like it but I have to say that this '...like a lovely lizard on a rock...' just about sums Lynch up. I mean, come on, no matter how 'lovely' who wants to be compared to a lizard?

(OMG! I almost forgot, I saw Angie's comment and I'm all for that LOL)

Lynch? Really? I still felt bad for him, tho.

That you could make my heart ache for Kevin is the mark of a truly incredible storyteller.

I almost feel bad for this Kevin... And then I think of sheep shit Kevin and I am okay. ;)

Poor Kevin. He really needs to find love. With Strauss, Perhaps? LOL

Great one shot. You know how much I love angst!

Angie

You can't see it, but I'm bowing to the master MG storyteller. Only you could get me to feel super bad for Kevin to the point of almost empathizing with him.

What made it all the more emotionally charged was as much as I was rooting for Penelope and Derek I was still feeling sorry for Kevin. Especially since clearly the whole team knew or suspected what was up and in his gut he knew something huge was about to happen.

Fantastic job.

Awww, that was sweet. Especially the Penelope and Morgan scene. I 'marginally' feel bad for Lynch. But the M/G part of me doesn't at all. Great story! :)

Aw, that was sweet. I think this makes up for the other story. Great job!

Thank you for writing this piece, it was very refreshing. It was nice to read about a version of Kevin Lynch that wasn't a huge jerk or a murdurous psycho. I have never understood why so many people harbor such an avid sense of hatred toward him.

Don't get me wrong, I'm a total MG girl. But, the canon version of Kevin is actually an okay dude. I'm not opposed to Kevin Lynch, I'm just opposed to Kevin + Penelope, because as we all know; MG is a relationship practically written in the stars.

So way to swim upstream Kricket. Stay classy. (like that's a challenge for you)

well, for once kevin is not a psycho but a poor man in love with the wrong woman

Marginally good girlfriend? He's such an ass.

I actually felt sorry for him so great job as I do not like him so to feel emotion other than dislike is truly a great effort lol great job as always

Oooo this I good! Morgan is stubborn and determined she should have known that after he confessed his love he wouldn't back off lol! I don't blame him...that sexy beast lol! But I don't feel bad for Kevin...Kevin is/was only jealous and ugly toward Morgan because he knew the god honest truth...duh!

aww good oneshot hun.