I very much enjoyed. It was a great look into Rosalie's character and the canon aspects make it so that I'm willing to accept it as such. Very well done.

Nicely done. Followed this one from ADF-you had me at "canon" and "Rosalie."

I especially like the moment that you highlighted in the thread-Edward's realization that Rosalie didn't drink from anyone, and how that led him to respect her in a very different way. I think a lot of their bond comes from this moment and the respect he feels for her from it.

I also love the idea that Edward was seeing the men in her mind and that it took him a little while to put two and two together. That was a very nice touch.

Well done.

This was a really nice canon glimpse. I loved the POV since most fics I read centering around Rosale's rampage focus on her. Inventive. Loved your ending and Rose's decision not to drink from them. Really well done. Thank you.

I love the way you capture Rosalie and her quest for vengance as well as the relationship that is forming between Rosalie and Edward. They have a thorny relationship, but they love each other as siblings.

I absolutely loved this glimpse into Rosalie's revenge, and especially her saying that she wanted no part of them in her-excellent tie in.

Very well done.

You know what I loved most about this fic...your ending. It was nice to see that Edward and Rosalie could come to some degree of peace between them. The graphic descriptions were wonderful.

Fantastic job. I love that you decided to dig a little bit deeper into Rosalie's story. She's a sadly under-appreciated character. The way that the family was so anxious to find her before it was too late seemed so spot-on to me. You did such a great job with every one of these characters here. I always worry when writing multiple characters that I'm going to make one (or more) too dull and lifeless while focusing on the main parts. I think a lot of people have that problem, but you certainly don't.

I also really loved the little detail of Carlisle making the sign of the cross to bless the recently deceased (worthless bastard) Royce.

All around great job with this. *hugs&schmoozles;*

Round of applause...that was worth the read Batgirl...hehehe

Fantastic job. I love that you decided to dig a little bit deeper into Rosalie's story. She's a sadly under-appreciated character. The way that the family was so anxious to find her before it was too late seemed so spot-on to me. You did such a great job with every one of these characters here. I always worry when writing multiple characters that I'm going to make one (or more) too dull and lifeless while focusing on the main parts. I think a lot of people have that problem, but you certainly don't.

I also really loved the little detail of Carlisle making the sign of the cross to bless the recently deceased (worthless bastard) Royce.

All around great job with this. *hugs&schmoozles;*

I really liked this story - it was one of my favorites in the first round. You captured a painful time for Rosalie and the other Cullens beautifully and the bits at the end with Edward and Rosalie were wonderful. I loved Edward's last line!