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The makings of a new Torchwood family.

I thought you did great with Owen! I thought it was interesting about him not wanting anything to do with Corey. You know, the only thing I'd say constructively is that Owen...I never think of Owen as aloof, which is kind of how he came across sometimes here. Aloof, no. Harsh and brash, yes. That's my only suggestion. I am going to have to break down and watch the movie, I think, if you're going to get into a war that I'm clueless about. Is that where I should start with Transformers? The first movie? Oh, and I've lost your actual email address, so if you want to send that along I'll use it this time. :) Great work lately, though! Thanks!

Yay! I really enjoyed the Jackand Lacey goodness here, particularly when he hinted at his youth. I love when we get glimpses into his past. The Suzie you are creating certainly is different than the show,but it makes sense. I am a little glad they are going back to the States, but I wonder if Jack catching back up to them is going to be harder than they think. I have to let you know that I got a little confused at the conversation with the TW 3 operative, but I might have just missed something (I have a bad cold and am kind of fuzzy on concentration right now). Overall, though, another very enjoyable read! Thanks!

Oh, no. What a heartwrencher this was! I liked it being told from Alex's perspective because I love the enigma that Jack presents to those who work with him. I thought this was a very good transition story, and I look forward to the next part! I do love your writing!