i'm sorry. i usually love death note and weird ass pairings, but i have to draw a line.
one, she's like 13. it's creepy just from that fact alone. if this was about Backyard Bottomslash, i'd adore this
two, no where in the book does BB show that he feels any romantic attraction between himself and his victims. mello would have pointed this out in some way.
AND THREE, THE THING THAT ANNOYS ME THE MOST ABOUT THIS, IS THAT QQ ISN'T THE FIRST VICTIM, SHE'S THE SECOND. THE FIRST WAS BELIEVE BRIDESMAID...also, QQ's eye gouging happened postmortem. please keep facts in line.
other than these things, this story was lovely, you have a real eye (or mind...whatever) for details and i love how insane BB sounds in this.

Dude i think im gonna to be sick...

This was frighteningly beautiful. I enjoyed it quite a lot.

3 That was fantastic.