Urg, I hate it when I find a good story and it hasn't been updated in forever! I really hope that you decide to continue this.

Oh crap! Uncle Iroh is in deep soft now.

I read your teaser and almost cried for Iroh. But man, is Ozai going to have his hands full when big brother comes home with glowy eyes, an unnaturally deep voice, and an announcement that he's taking back "his" throne.

Of course the first story I find in a while that is actually interesting hasn't been updated in a while. Well, I love the story anyway so PLEASE continue it!

Iroh's in danger! I hope they can get that snake out of his head.

Love it. Would like to see more installments of this story. Keep up the good work.

this is a great start! i'm interested to see where you'll take the story...

well an interesting story. good one, keep going

I like this. A lot.

Okay, firstly I haven't seen all of the SG-1 series and I also haven't watched it in a long time, so I don't know how much help I can be in that department. But I really liked this. I loved the banter between the SG-1 team and I like how the story just starts, like, there's no gentle buildup or anything. Poor Dai Li agent :( Still, had to be someone I guess :) I want to read more Luna!

djinn

Lord give them strength

If the Goa'uld is smart, he'll set the gang against the SGC, get his two biggest opponents to fight and destroy each other, while he secretly build up his forces to take over the planet.

Knowing the gang, they will more likely believe 'Iroh' over the 'strange warriors' sent to killed him. Toph might be able to sense something amiss.

What season is this set for both shows. I assuming post season 3 for ATLA, what of Stargate.

If you need anybody to bounce idea off, i be willing to help.

Good story, hope to see more