 ClaudyStream 12/8/11 . chapter 1I just love the way you have with words. Spiderweb. Waaaaaaahhhhhh.
"She used to fear she was too obvious, when she felt something, but then she realized Derek usually wasn't looking that closely." - This is just so spot-on. Ugh, and the rest of your fic, really. It's like, Addie "should" be happy, but she's not, for reasons that she can't quite pinpoint exactly. Perfect fic to the prompt, if I may say so XD
(Random: LAWD I was like "how many Addek children have you made?" reading down the page. The names just kept on coming! Hahahahaha XP) |
 Right Hand Blue 11/8/11 . chapter 1This was incredibly heartbreaking, and yet it made me think that 'Gosh, she thinks she picked the short straw sleeping with Mark' but after this it was like 'Yeah she should see herself in this lifetime.' Amazingly written with a plot that would have easily have happened if she'd been faithful.
Bravo! |
 deslil 11/6/11 . chapter 1I really like this. Is this gonna be just a one-shot or a multi chapter fic. Cause i totally want to read more. |
 LeaveMeHypnotized 11/6/11 . chapter 1YAY! I missed your stories so much:)
This one is really depressing, but I think it might have played out this way if Mark and Addie hadn't gone for it. Derek never realizing that his wife is unhappy and she never telling him because she thinks she should be happy...
And "You'd think it was YOUR best friend leaving town." Probably my favourite line here, but it also hurts:'( It's all about you, Derek, isn't it? |
 AmyHale 11/6/11 . chapter 1Wow. It's so intense... I like it a lot. It's strange, but perfect at the same time. |
 permeated-words 11/6/11 . chapter 1Oh hi! My pretty prompt is so... Pretty. Thank you for writing it and thank you for letting me prompt you. And another thank you for indulging in my Addek obsession. Can you believe you wrote alive!Addek babies? Oh my god. I think this is the longest they have ever lived in the history of fanfiction.
Why didn't you talk about their feet, though? Feet are an integral part of fic. I can't read your fic, I'm on an all-feet diet! God, Winter Machine you are so stupid!
FMS. |
 DeathByMushrooms 11/5/11 . chapter 1I only recently discovered your work, and I'm pretty exclusively Addek or Maddison when it comes to Grey's Anatomy, so I was terribly excited to see this. Well done. You manage to put so much emotion into what seem to be such little, unimportant conversations and actions. It's always lovely reading your pieces, and this one was no different. Thanks! |
 lovereading12 11/5/11 . chapter 1Very interesting take on life. Sometimes people choose easy because they are scared to risk. And ofcourse even choosing what seems easy doesn't mean it will make you happy. |