Very nice. tony will be amased at tims daring (once again!) seeing the princess at night in her bedroom! Recieving kisses and gifts! At least tim will be starting this task without feeling so despairing.

I wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading this story but I find myself greatly enjoying it. I love how the characters have both stayed true to themselves as well as change to fit the setting. Tim and Tony's camraderie shines in this chapter and I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story.

Excellent! Well I know his task is mighty and a challenging quest but still it appears that he Timothy mcGee the mere knight has won the heart of the fair Princess Ziva! Three cheers for this momentous occasion!

He has more than he started out this morning with. In fact Im sure it will be a case of detctive work to figure out what the problem is and what happened to those that went before them. I hope Tim and Tony can win the respect of King David and the Kingdom will be regaled with tall tales of these fast friends many adventures!

Love your mix of words & language! Thanks, also, for the translations of the towns ...I was trying to make them be funny things, forgot about the Latin!

Awesome reimagining, and love the Latin! And a McGiva- I heartily approve! Keep going, Sir Mini Bagel!

love it can't wait for next chapter

Great story! Can't wait for more, sure hope Tim can get it together to win the Princess Ziva, er, I mean the jousting.