This is an interesting idea and very well written, and I hope you continue and write stories for the other characters. Loved how Sayid ran Shannon down and got an answer for why she called security on them, and that leading to a long-term relationship, and Sayid helping her relationship with Boone. The scene with Sun and Jin was very intense and full of twists. Sun opening a gallery in New York sounds so much like she's going to run into Michael; it would be great to see that develop and what kind of life Michael, Walt, and Vincent would have. Charlie getting a second chance with Claire was very touching, and it would be nice to see where that leads. What else - Hurley gets back in time for his mother's birthday, does Locke remain paralyzed, can Kate escape jail, does Sawyer resume conning, Jack get his father's coffin home safely, and Penny ever find Desmond?

Intrigued with this. Can't wait to read more.