Oh. WOW. Things just got even more interesting! My mind's reeling from the possibilities you could be taking us, and I'm loving it.

Wow. I was not expecting that ending! You have me intrigued. Great first chapter!

Amazing story - hope you write more from jacobs pov as you are really good at it. Do you have plans to write anything new ?

I don't remember where I saw this, but I was captivated by your starting point and had to keep going.

You were not kidding about the body count. My goodness. But still, it worked for me.

I think the final chapter was probably the one that didn't sit well. From the "how to basically hide a bajillion dollars" to so many years of waiting until Jacob and Bella to get married.

BUT the birth of young Seth Uley was the perfect ending.

Overall, a satisfying story. :) Thank you for writing it!

The explanation of sperm grossed me out a bit. I mean I'm a mom and I've been through all that jazz, but really? She was all clinical about telling him that they were going to have a baby. With the corpse, she didn't talk like as if she was stating something out of an encyclopedia, she was emotional and happy and different. Losing that kid should have nothing to do with her being monotone and matter of fact about being pregnant again. I mean isn't that what she wanted? Another baby? Granted this time around it's with someone who's actually alive and she doesn't have to die in order to have the kid. So it is different to an extent.

Idk.

Not sure how I feel about the lack of emotion in her telling Jacob that they were going to have a baby. It bothers me greatly, the feeling in the chapter that that baby doesn't mean as much as the other one. Idk. Maybe it's just me, but that's what I gathered from reading. The tone was off, again, that could be because she handled telling Jacob about the baby the way you handle telling someone that they have bronchitis.

One a lighter note, very very happy for Leah and Sam. He got out of his imprint loss and came home to his first love. I'm glad that he got his HEA after his grief. And Leah too. She had a baby, something she thought that she would never experience. I think that was my favorite part out of this chapter. Leah and Sam, their baby, and that Bella actually did something non-selfish with the money.

Not sure how I feel about this chapter.

Jacob was honest about imprinting on the demon spawn. Which is good, I guess. Her reaction was odd.

So, the Cullen's left her everything. Wow, bet thats a fuckton of money. Hopefully she does something helpful with it.

Speechless.

Seth is dead.

I'm gonna stop there before I start saying some fucked up shit.

*sighs*

I have a bad feeling.

I don't like that Jacob let himself be dragged back into Bella's fucked up-ness. She should have done way more groveling than she did. She should have proven herself WAY more than that little shitty piece of information that she gave him.

She wanted to experience more sex... *gags* That's fantastic, nice of her to be "discreet" about what it was. I'm sure Jacob will carry that visual until he's old and withering. Sickening.

I'm not a huge post BD fan, especially if it has to do with Bella already having committed necrophilia, so this is new territory for me. Having a hard time picturing Jacob with this Bella. She still make me want to punch something.

Way to go Jacob!

Don't let that snake back in your life. At least not until she's proven that she's more than just a sneaky snake in the grass.

UGH!

Hate, HATE Bella.

I may despise Blackwater, but that doesn't mean that I dislike Leah. Although I do think that many writers do her a disservice and make her a more snarky bitch than she actually is. I do think that she deserves more than a broken Sam.

Poor Jacob, Bella is coming back to destroy him further.

*sighs*

Stories like these make me wish that he would torture her by being happy without her. As much as I am a J/B fan, a big one, canon Bella fics make me have angry outbursts.

Strange chapter.

Wonder how Sam is going to deal with his imprint's death.

Leah slightly creeped me out. Sad for Sam. Poor Emily.

Jacob being Alpha is bound to be interesting. He was okay with just Leah and Seth, but the whole pack? I wonder how that's gonna go.

Heartfail! Heartfail! Heartfail!

GAH!

Jacob... STOP HOPING SHE'LL COME BACK!

UGH!

If she does come back, I hope he ignores her and makes her feel like the pile of cow shit she is.

Stupid, moronish, selfish, martyr canon Bella.

*growls*

Extremely angry at Bella.

I want to burn the corpse and turn him into a pile of ash.