Poor James my heart goes out to him, damn the evil queen.

I hate the evil queen why does she keep wanting snow to suffer what did she ever do her? Snow is a kind and sweet person what could she have done for the evil queen to keep punishing her?

Its so hard for her to accept the truth because of her destroyed childhood all due to the evil queen.

Omg I hope she believes him, so she can save snow, also if Emma finds out the truth about the gunman she can use that to get henry

No please you can't let him die :(

Maybe she needs to see those ripped pages

Awesome story

Awesome she's remembering but she doesn't believe

Awesome I love what your doing here with this story, James telling the Queen B!tch off that was Fantastic! Also I'm happy that evil queen doesn't have her powers or James would be dead

Oh sh!t he just pissed off an angry witch

Wow his own kid threatens him ouch! Poor James, but isn't he afraid of Regina figuring out he knows

If tells them the truth they'll think hes nuts, however I wonder why Henry never told Emma to have them take a paternity test to prove Mary and David are her parents

brilliant

I love this story! The only criticism I have is that you need to update more so I don't have to deal with my Bid Memories Return withdrawals. Other than that, a wonderful story and wonderful writing. Keep up the good work!

Great job! I loved that you took your time to tell the story this chapter, it definitely wasn't too long. I could have read more! Thanks!