Cool story. On to the next in the series.

Hey! So I kept putting off reading this because I was going to watch the movie first. But time keeps getting the better of me, so tonight I just jumped into this anyway. I thought you did a great job, particularly with the final scene. Poor Jack and his brother complex. I do so like John Keller, btw. What a cool character. Nice job here! Funny that Rhys is the secret organization guy, not Gwen. I am looking forward to your next story!