that prof pic should be illegal

she strikes me as the type to tell Naruto her identity when they meet again.

You say its average but the funny thing is that Everybody wants to be original and they forget the classics like : like naruto dimension hoping and becoming a hero yours is the only one I noticed

I love it. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Also assuming the fact that Peter was not bitten by the spider, uncle Ben would be alive right? I also liked how you presented both Naruto and MJ.

hope u update

Love this fic. Love how may Jane has been portrayed love how Naruto has been shown, both as a civilian and the shinobi. Also love how and why Mary Jane becomes a superhero. Can't wait I read more

Interesting story so far :)

Please don't make this story a multi paring. It kills all genuine romance, and love in the story. I have no interest in reading another idiotic "My main character is so awesome all the ladies want his c*ck, and for SOME reason, they're all okay with it." Cliche. No. A slut main character isn't awesome, they're a slut.

Please don't ruin this story by adding anyone else to the paring. Soo many authors just pander to readers and add multiple people to a paring, which kills any real feel of romance in a story. I've NEVER met a woman, or man who would willingly share their partner. So to see it in a story just makes me lose all interest in the "romance."

good chapter I like the story so far and I can't wait for more

hmm, i like the looks of this!

this is pretty good so far , maybe try to increase the chapter length and you'd be golden In my books

Update ASAP:)!

Nice story so far wonder when Spider-girl and Naruto will hook up anyways keep up the great work!

Nice, wonder if Naruto knows fuinjutsu and the Hiraishin.

Plus hope he meets X-23/Laura Kinney.