update asap

update asap

It's really good so far :) update ASAP :)

I think this is sounding good, but something I can't get past is in the title 'servant' has an 'a' not an 'e' as you put down, just thought you'd like to know. Good work apart from that though. : )

you have a very good begining and the character is stating up nicely.

Can you say how to pronounce her name as i was having a hard time to get the sound of it in my head.

great story please update soon.

i loved it update asap