Please continue this soon.

Absolutely love this fic, keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more! :D
~TA

Gotta admit I'm not exactly all that into Love Hina but I gotta say this is actually pretty damn enjoyable, looking forward to Shirou figuring out what Kanakos deal actually is eventually.

I hope this is just the beginning... I need more!

*can't breathe* hahahahahahaha rider and sakura talking like shirou aint there is funny.

This... I need MOAR of this!

Hehehe to be Shirou Emiya is Suffering! LOLOLOLOLOLOL

Illya! Oh no! Run for thr hills! Save yourselves!

I really don't know jack about Love Hina and I don't care to learn, but just treating this as a weird and silly side-story to the Fate setting has been pretty amusing so far.

Predominant, not preponderant. Whoever you were employing as your beta reader wasn't worth the money you weren't paying them.

I find it really annoying how you keep using "permanence" instead of "residence." It's not like that even makes any sense. It's not an easy mistake to make. How does that even happen?

Write more when you are able! You finally added in the lunacy of Illya. It's going to get good from here.

A fucking private school in Scotland that not many people know... Hogwarts?

Wow Shirou really handled that in an adult like manner. Great work Shirou.

Wow man Shirou's life sure has gotten complicated.

Great work but which route is this Shirou from? UBW?