 x.Janele.x 7/13/10 . chapter 9Maybe Hope is Bulma's guardian angel? Like the picture she drew :) |
 x.Janele.x 7/13/10 . chapter 2Frieza is totally asexual lol. I'm afraid to find out what'll happen if yours isn't! |
 x.Janele.x 7/13/10 . chapter 1Wow, that beginning was chilling! Looking forward to a good read. |
 Norientra 7/30/09 . chapter 33So I read this a long time ago and I still love it, it has a very unique aura about it and I love it^.^ Keep it up^.^ |
 supersayamn 12/28/08 . chapter 10 so now vegeta will ffind out how the sevents that are forced to wok to uuply food for them are treated.i wonder if this will change their opinion on how they treat the beings they inslave. why is their barb wire on the plants dosnt make cence. |
 supersayaman 12/28/08 . chapter 6 whas some one trying to kill them and if so why? |
 supersayaman 12/28/08 . chapter 4 so will vegeta help bulma or give her back to freza |
 supersaiyaman 12/28/08 . chapter 2 i wonder if bulma will servive freza and will vegeta and bulma develope a relationship. |
 Sagetim 6/30/08 . chapter 33 I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story over all. It had it's ups and downs, and some parts that were just a bit, weak. But the parts that were weak were easily overshadowed by the parts that were just plain fantastic. It was a joy to read, and it even brought me to tears at some points. Thank you, and good luck with all that you do. |
 jcogginsa 3/4/08 . chapter 1his name is spelled vegeta |
 Elizabeth 2/12/08 . chapter 33 Hi, my names Elizabeth. I don't know if I'm aloud to do this but um...oh well. I have just started a website
http:/redeyedfreak13.
At the moment I don't have any fanart or fanfiction so I am going through this website and selecting my favorite stories that I've read over and over and sending this message to them. I was wondering if you could check out the page and maybe enter my contest or subit a fanfiction (I like Whispered Hell In Her Eyes and would love to have it on my page) or fanart if you do that.
Thanks for your time and hope you like my website if you visit it. Wonderful story! And you did a great job of keeping the characters in character (lol). Great job. |
 Mystique86 1/12/08 . chapter 33Wow, I came in reading this story expecting something totally different. This story is by far the most original I have read so far. Even though I'm not a big fan of morbid stories, I really enjoyed reading your story.
Occasionally, it got a bit confusing( especially with the Gauche(sp?)) but the story still flowed pretty well. The part that didn't make sense was how Bulma still got pregnant even though Zarbon raped her while they were in the Gauche (and the Guache is supposed to be a state of mind/not physically real)? I dunno, maybe u explained it and I missed that explanation, lol.
Hopefully u continue to write, maybe when college becomes a little less hectic or when u finish because u r very good at it. Good luck!
Mysti |
 Khris 11/22/07 . chapter 33 Thank you once again. I really do like the poem. I'll look out for more of your stories.
Read you later
Khris |
 Yari 11/21/07 . chapter 33 your welcome, you deserved it! I am so happy with this last chapter it puts the closure I wanted; loved the peom. And I am glad u r here to stay! |
 Khris 11/20/07 . chapter 32 Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. I really like the way you ended it. I understood right away that they had found eachother and were entering the afterlife. I would as well like to read the epilogue that you have written. If you like it, I'm sure to as well. Thanks again.
Read u later
Khris |