I found this story of yours. It's very good with some rather interesting twists (Jessica's death at the hand of Snow; and Scarface's death at. Carter's hands). I'm disconcerted though that you haven't updated this story in two years! You've got me intrigued - hooked. I hope that life finds you well, and that you will be able to finish this story. I'd dearly love to see how this ends up.

Hi this is a really good story. Please continue!

Lovely story one hell of a cliff hanger though. Please update please thank you

This story is really intriguing. I like how you use the canon but shift it just enough to make up an entirely different perspective. Great writing. Please update it if you are still writing.

i am happy i found your story well done. i hope you can continue with this story. have a good new year :)

Loving this! Please consider updating.

I liked this one a lot!

What a twist that Reese may have turned Nathanial over to his death. I really like your story.

Whoa! You totally threw me with the dream!

Great chapter! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON

Oh man! This is amazingly episodic and I can't wait for the commercial break to be over!

Oh my god, can Elias stoop any lower. He is just the biggest scumbag out of everyone because he constantly will use a loved one to get what he wants. Plz get an update up soon cause I want to read more:D

Of course now Joss is in trouble. Boo. Just kidding. Loved it once again.

This just makes me want to learn more about John's characterXD Another great chapter.

It such a shame how Jessica had no clue yet she was the reason why John couldn't do his job. That sucks. Great insight in this chapter.