I'm so happy that I came across this! It's so amazing and I love how you really brought out more in Noel's character. Really, I'm in love
Hopefully you'll find time to write more

One of the very best Noerah I've read. What I love most is the versatility of this story; some are raw, some are mysterious, some funny, some angsty. Loved it. I wish you'd continue. But as for CC, there are some grammatical errors and incorrect word usage. It's nothing a simple re-reading wouldn't cure.

Cant wait till next chapter, i enjoy you story it has made my Christmas

I love the way you write snow ):
(unfortunately my reviews get shorter and shorter)

It's been about 15 years since I rolled around going 'ahh-ahhAHHHHH' at a fic.
Bravo.

And then chapter 2 handles NORA and I thought Lebreau would think about and handle the situation the same way you wrote it! Either way yeah I wasn't feeling the start of the chapter, but I did feel sympathy for Snow (I typically do in ways. He is stupidly wreckless, but how hard he tries is really sincere-but i do find their relationship over-all shallow)

Also I felt so awkward during the Hope parts (this is a good thing, because we feel the emotions and distress Hope does, giving it appears to be in his POV).
Good job with this story

Excellent story. I have only read the first chapter thusfar, but I was gripped by the 'selfish' drabble. It's what I've been looking for in a Noel/Serah fic. Too many I've seen abandon the concept of everyone around them such as Nora, Snow, Lightning etc. The pros and cons of everyone... everything I found so intriguing about the idea of Noel and Serah falling in love all gone :C

Then I find this story and it's a well-writtened gold mine omg.

I also like your focus on their ability to read each other's body language because of the sheer amount of natural chemistry that is present between them, It's cool parallel to how her relationship with Snow is/was more verbal.

My mossst favorite part was the part she was tangled up in his form asleep. How he did not take advantage-how he is still relatively much more innocent than Serah while still being aware of the closeness she was to his body. How he is so dutiful he allowed her to use him as a source of warmth and a pillow, all without being impolite or selfish, then a drabble later you show how selfish serah was about it ALL while mentioning the neglect she had from Snow. Also mentioning how he comfortable coddled life style disappears one by one and Noel is there to jerk her out of it-at least, smooth out the transition.

One chapter and this work is so excellent ALL OF MY KUDOS, AUTHOR.

You are appreciated and you're an inspiration!

I've always wondered whether or not Serah will reincarnate... I do hope so! Then Square will have a reason to make Noel x Serah canon since technically she's not the same Serah. LOL. Update soon!

Love, love, LOOOOOOVE this story. Is it wrong that I either want to be Serah or want a man just like Noel? Your Noel is so perfect, you just made me fall even more in love with him. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this pairing so much. And I love your interpretation of Sazh, because I always imagined he'd be comically gullible and quick to jump to conclusions when it came to young people.

No joke- hands down- the best fanfiction I have read yet :D I love this couple and you served them justice in this story, I looooooooooooved it :D that was fantastic!

Magnificent! Bravo! Thanks so much for such an amazing fic! Continue on!

This very sweet and it had excellent detail.

I absolutely love this fic and the pairing! Great job! :)

Favorited and followed. This is by far the best FF-XIII fanfic I'ver ever read, period. Noel/Serah is my favorite ship out of all fanficdom. Their journey in the game (literally and figuratively) sets up their relationship so beautifully; a romance is bound to happen. You brought their relationship to life. Thank you!