Awww. Sibling bonding. I love it. ^^

Yay! I finally caught up! I love the story!

~Ally out

Great cliffhanger.

Yay! I was so worried about Peter's stupidity earlier now I'm sooooo happy :D And I loved the bit with Edmund and Lucy, great chapter my oh so talented Granddaughter xxx

Thanks for updating.

Great cliffhanger and good interaction through the door. Is Peter going to chase after Lucy?

I want to know what happen's next so baaaad.

Wow great idea. That's so ironic. Adding Lord Scrubb was a nice touch. Will Peter ever get all his memory back?

Ok, this? Is proof that Friday the 13th ain't bad luck like people think. It's an update which is the exact opposite of bad luck. :-) My sympathy on the writer's block, though. That's a pain in the butt.

I want to kick Lord Scrubb's ass. He's such a jerk. I bet he'd have preferred to just kill Ed instead of bringing him home. Can I knock him down a few pegs? Please? Maybe strip the lord protectorate from him? *puppy eyes*

They've got Ed back! I just hope that recognizing Lucy will counteract the Witch's indoctrination sufficiently for now. And I really hope he believes them when they tell him who he really is. Although... I have a feeling we're about to see some explosive clashing between the brothers. Poor Ed has no clue about what a family's supposed to be like. He's gonna be a mess. No question about it.

Very dramatic and its interesting that Edmund confided in Maugrim. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter. I can't wait till they get to reunite with edmund. Also great use of the scrubbs' name. I hope eustace will be included in the future chapters maybe later as a friend of edmund.

I just realised I haven't reviewed the last couple of chapters, I'm so horrible. Great chapter, as always. I really liked Talinusa it's brilliant you didn't chop her out :D Upload more soon, good girl xxx

The chapter is written really well. Also Lilliandll and Peter are a good "couple". You wrote the drama really well and the chapter flows. Keep writing.

This story... This story is brilliant! :-) I love your reworking of this world. I have to wonder if Susan and especially Peter forgot just because of the trauma or if it wasn't something someone did to protect them Peter seems to have been old enough not to forget on his own. I love how Lucy and Edmund seem to be connected through their dreams. Edmund's instinctive Narnian-ness (yeah, I know, not a real word) fits. How horrible for him that he's been taught to fight it and be ashamed of it. Your Maugrim... For all that he's loyal to the witch, I can't hate him. It's good that Ed has some kind of friend. Poor kid. He thinks that what he's been put through is normal, is for his own good. Even without what I suspect to be a plot to force him to kill his real family, he's going to have problems when he fibally gets home. I'm looking forward to him meeting Lucy and recognizing her as the girl from his dreams. More, please?

It getting really good! I love the connection between Edmund and Lucy and how they can "feel" each other. Your writing is amaxing(as always) and cannot wait for for the future chapters!