This was simply amazing, adorable, and just absolutely perfect. Kurogane was perfect in this. I loved it! Thank you for writing and sharing it! I thought the ending was fantastic! Made my day!

so sweet :) Yay for Kuro openly caring about his Fai!

Cute story! The ending is kind of sappy, but it works!

lovely :) It's great that Kurogane was there to try make it better. Being alone with all these burdens would be unbareable even for Fai...
Wish the story was longer! n_n

This is so great for your first fanfiction! I hope you keep writing, your awesome at capturing Fai and Kurogane! I hope to read more stories from you in the future!

That story actually provoked an 'Aww' from me... I love it. Was hoping for some romance, but this worked so well.

I liked it, It was really nice and sweet :D

Very sweet! Thank you! :)

Hi.

This was a sweet one shot. Kurogane let out his protective nature, and Fai just let his facade fall for once.

Nice story.

liked it. a fun read.

Pretty good for a first fic! I loled at In-denial!Kuro. And don't worry, sappy is good! I like sappy. Keep it up and keep on writing!

I really liked it. Keep up the good work! :D