 Azh Hikari 4/4/12 . chapter 1This is very hot, a sequel to this, please? |
 AuJeu 4/3/12 . chapter 1ohohoh Oh I loved it ! oh the smut in it full glory ! I know it is a one-shot but it was so beautifully written, so can you add a bit like a epilogue or something ... Sanji has to be taken care of too right ? ! Thumps up for the good work ! I cant wait to read more from you ! (^_^) |
 OnlyChangeISConstant 4/1/12 . chapter 1Amazing story...
Sanji's confusion and the actions he portrayed were excellent.. :)
A sequel to this would be much appreciated :) :) |
 arisa4 3/26/12 . chapter 1I like the way you decribed Sanji's confusion about his own feelings and the whole story's atmosphere, it was so IC and all, really ZoSanZo (?) like. Just one correction if you let me. I think the "romance" category is totally wrong here. If you'll continue this fic (I set complete on the top menu) what I would like you to do and add more romance in the story that would be great^^ I really want to see Zoro's payback for Sanji's action~ 3 if you know what I mean hehe |
 NarcissisticNinny 3/25/12 . chapter 1That was so hot, I loved it. I do hope you'll continue this, though no pressure. :)
I love how Sanji was battling with himself over how he felt about Zoro and the way he got around to biting Zoro again XD
Nice work, I absolutely love your writing. 3 |
 demonfox910 3/25/12 . chapter 1im not a big fan of yaoi, though i don't critisize it. I'm reviewing just to tell you that the phrase is "scratch an itch."
I know that english is not your first language |