sweet :) u should do something similiar to that again :)

plz do another! fic like this maybe AU? (NO curse) David and mary work togehter (police station maybe) and sometimes they have hot sex? mostly in the they car hidden in the woods? david is married to kath?
or another story
mm is married or engaged to james but she has sex with his brother david?
or
david adopted emma and mm is the babysitter he fucks (MM is married to whale)
i have so many storys idea if u cous do one similar to the ones i just wrote it would be amazing i would prefer a no curse or EF fic plz! that would be so good plz

Such an entertaining piece! Wish you continued to write for Snowing because you're really great.

Any, ANY chance of a follow up to this? I've just spent the las ten minutes practically screaming. Please add something to this? Pretty please?

Oh this is fantastic! I love that MM had hunters of her real self. Such a good idea!

Please carry this on. Please.

That was uh, fu...dge. So hot! Damn. Thank you.

Lovely enough that I forgot I was reading, yet, hot enough to make me sweat...great story!

I ran into this by pure coincidence as "Once upon ..." wasn't broadcasted yet in Germany, but although I new next to nothing about the characters (wikipedia helping me out a little bit) this story made my heart ache. It's just the right mixture of intimacy, fun and sex. Ah, how I wished for them to find out the truth about their love ... so sweet, so sad! Thank you very much for sharing this story.

I just, I just want them to be together. Just like this. Is that so hard. Love your fiction, it is excellent and it makes me incoherent.

This is hilarious and so good but mostly I just wanted to say that this is super hot and that I hate the relative lack of porn for them, but this fic definitely helped make up for that! Now if only we could get some of this on the show...

There is literally nothing I don't love about this story. Absolutely nothing. I usually try to give better reviews than that, but, well, this is perfect.

This show is like a breath of fresh air.

Too much predictible, crime and conspiracy on TV.

I love that farytale still has it's place.

This was great. Right up to the favorites ;-)

Love this story! I've been waiting for something like this between

MM and David!

This is perfect. In every way. Love the characterization, internal thoughts, everything-it seems right within the context of what we know, too. The perfect balance of humor, story and desire. LOVED it.