I know that you haven't updated in like three years, but you should definitely finish this story. XD I'm dying here wanting to know the outcome of all this.

Wait...I just read the last bolded part and Nile I'm confused. They aren't to be confused with the Pokémon Adventures Blue and Red but aren't supposed to be mistaken for Ash and Gary either. So what is my mental image of the two? I do need one to understand the story ...

Come on! Make another god damn chapter! Pleeeeeeeeeaaasssseeeee!

Good fanfiction so far, can't wait to read next chapter. BTW, Blue's original name is Green. Most people who ship the two use the name Green instead of Blue

This is great!

Well thank goodness we didn't get anything where the psychics show Blue the true extent of Red's insanity.
Because that shit would send anybody running for the hills.
I'm starting to worry that this story doesn't have a happy ending... it has a happy ending, right? Right? ...FLESH?
In all seriousness though, the way that you get into Blue's head is similar to the way that I've always seen Gary, except that I've never seen Red or Ash as complete psychopaths. How long has Fire been around, anyway? Was he always this crazy? When did he get the ability to possess Red? I doubt that Red would ever consent to letting Fire control his body, so I don't know if Fire would've gotten the opportunity to practice moving in a body. My tulpas are always baffled by the complexity of something as simple as a hand. But I'm probably over-thinking it.
On another note, if I write long, seemingly unrelated reviews, it's because your story has me thinking, and that is a good thing.
I seriously love this story. It's like it hovers on the light, fluffy end of the spectrum before plunging into the depths of fear, longing, and rage. Wow. That earns an author favorite, I think!

AH
TULPA SHENANIGANS
I would like to point out that this sort of thing is super duper rare in the real world. Mostly people who've suffered really horribly and who have really powerful introspection abilities have crazy shit like evil tulpas that can posses their bodies without consent happen to them.
Other than that, this story is terrifying and awesome and oh god I can't stop reading.

I like the Idea of Fire, but He needs a bit more action. Also we need someone to make Blue jealous. I think that a legendary should look at Red and see Fire and Red. I like mental breakdowns do more! I find it very touching when someone tries to commit suicide but someone else stops them.

other reds that would/might work:
Rusty red
Cardinal red
Cornell Red
Crimson
scarlet
chestnut
tuscan red
Vermilion (yes it's a red)
Amaranth

Beautiful so far! I've never played Pokemon Red/Blue but I know how the plot goes, and this story gives a brand new take on it for me!
And I really liked the end, especially the very end sentence - "Please... love me too...?"
Sad but absolutely fantastic! I can imagine Red realising suddenly that what he felt about Blue - he thought it was simply what came with friendship, but, slowly, it occurred to him that it was love. And probably his desperation when Blue doesn't appear to return what Red is privately thinking.
Love it!

Oh noes! D: lol
Have the chapter about Blue! :D

This is great! Please update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!

A lot of this was dark and disturbing. I like it.
I especially liked the part where Marowak realized Red wasn't the killer, and allowed him to put her to rest.
I know Red allowed Fire to take control temporarily and conditionally, but afterwards, Red still fought against Fire. Does it hurt Red just to have Fire in control?
Also, this new review thing is weird. I go on vacation for a few days, and the world changes...

I loved the raw emotion this chapter had. It was nice and the battle scenes were excellently written. I can't wait for the next chapter as always

Hm, I don't know what it is, but this story draws me in for some reason. Probably your style. It flows without being too stilted and has a decent amount of character angst that makes the characters a little more believable.

However, The story would flow better if you put in a little more detail, don't tell us what happens, show us.

Can't wait for your next update.