| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Natural 20 |
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| chapter 74 . 10/22 In an earlier chapter, I think you had Fiona look into Sirius' history - she was puzzled by the "nothing left but a finger" wording around Pettigrew's "death", and got mad that Sirius hadn't had a trial. You used the phrase "contraception of justice". |
| chapter 3 . 10/22 I don't understand why Milo thinks Wizard/"wizard" would be an actual joke of a charachter. sure it sounds like a joke at first until this joke starts casting multiple save or die spells at you and apparently has access to both cleric and alchemist, and just about every school of magic, with infinite spells to cast per day and no limits on how many he can learn. in short as a munchkin i would expect him to sooner or later realize that while Wizards have access to some powerful abilities that potter universe wizards don't potter universe wizards have access to so many perks that the mere fact they require a wand is worth the price of admission. of course we find out in later books potter wizards when skilled enough don't need a wand or even words, and there may be the possibility that his two wizard classes would share traits so casting his infinite "wizard" spells the Wizard way. |
| Maelaeran chapter 13 . 10/22 Of all HP fanfics, this last scene is EASILY my favourite portrayal of Dumbledore. Bravo. |
| eunorek chapter 40 . 10/19 Is it possible for the party to employ Quirrel as their new member someday? Their lack of rogue in the party disturbs me greatly. |
| Chronicler Sionnach chapter 1 . 10/14 Why don’t people ever look to see when the last update was? It was updated just over 2 months ago, calm down. It’s not abandoned until it’s been left for over a year and a month. |
| The Deadly Bunny chapter 74 . 10/14 Noooooooooooooooooooo For some reason I thought there was no way I'd catch up with this, what with my laughable reading speed and the sheer length, and yet here we are now. I sure hope this story isn't abandoned! |
| chapter 29 . 10/9 I was genuinely surprised by the trick. Very well done IMO. |
| Gamma Cavy chapter 29 . 10/7 Quirrel's trick wasn't transparent until Ron explained the schedule for each player making a move. It was very clever, but not executed quite well enough to hide the keys. |
| huntsmanassassin chapter 74 . 10/5 More please? I really like this one... |
| IamKroGan1 chapter 31 . 10/5 Harry and Ron need another spell, the leg locking curse combined with Expelliarmus would have worked well on the redcaps. |
| IamKroGan1 chapter 14 . 10/5 Lol, most of their assumptions are wrong. Could wrong have been quicker in agreeing to kill Draco? He seems more worried about stealing from Snape. |
| sindrisnctchr chapter 74 . 10/5 I distinctly remember Fiona coming to the conclusion that Sirius had obviously been framed back in the bookstore, before everything got lit on fire... Anyway, the (former) Sergeant is probably by favorite character in this whole series and I am super glad that she's officially joined the party. Now all we need is for Milo to get some sort of extradimensional storage item with proper life support, so he can smuggle her along into school and such. Solve her lack of a living condition and his need to summon a dedicated melee combatant on the spot without preparing spells, all in one stroke! |
| aphyer chapter 74 . 10/3 Did I miss Fiona getting Memory-Charmed sometime in the last few chapters? In Chapter 69 she encountered a book about Sirius and decided it was blindingly obvious that he HAD been framed, which doesn't seem to square with her reaction to him in this chapter? (Nitpicking aside, I love your story, and I'm glad you're not dead.) |
| chapter 29 . 10/1 Chess trick was transparent - but that doesn't make it not brilliant. Btw, I really enjoy this story - it's VERY funny and the way you play with the stupidity of both worlds is amazing. :) |
| chapter 59 . 10/1 I can't believe you pulled that tower shield nonsense. . . . |