I really like this fic but there are a few incoherences (like Edmund seeing the witch though he's blind...)
I would've also liked more details and a more fluid writing although I know you wrote this years ago
Thanks for the fic!

PAH! I hate it when fanfics borrow from the script. It's basically stealing. I would prefer a true AU change.

They would theroetical speaking need plans for the Witch's tower before breaking out Edmund and find any . Even maximum security has it's holes.

Oh! I like it!
Edmund's bling
Phillip's help
Edmund being kidnapped.. not willingly
i like is a lot :)
i'll read hidden lies now

Pleaseeeeeeeee do prince caspian bec that was amazing ! Can't wait for it if u start it :)

That a surprise ending to this chapter Edmund blind!

Wonder where this story is going so update soon please.

This story has promise. But I got a bit confused like going straight from the birth of Lucy to their father having to go to war when Lucy was 8.

I realised what was happening once I checked the ages of the children so please can put a line between each change.

But I like it and would like to see more.

You need a way to indicate when a scene is changing or else it's very confusing because honestly that entire first chapter could have been one scene for all your readers know . There's no indication that the scenes were set at different years you could put for example " Two years later" or whatever or even in italics " Line break" and then put how many years passed it's not a tv show or movie where it's easy to go from one year to ten just like that you need to let your readers know from the start that time has passed in some way

You have something going and I can see it. It will turn out well but it's a bit scrambled. I had to read it a couple of times to get what this chapter was about. It needs a bit of tweeking. It has great potential though. If you want any help, school is about out for me and I'm not taking any finals so I'll give you an offer. You're doing great. Just needs some polishing.