Class fiction they're all in character and the story line is very well written please update

Nicely written! Love your work!

Hi

Nice little one-shot.

The quality is good in many areas; good narration, interaction, dialog, drama and suspense. I do think some details need work (some I'm glad you didn't go into detail).

Your portrayal of Wuya and Chase was well-written. You kept them very in character, while adding a more mature vibe to their characters (and the story).

The basic story is short, but good.

The wholesome standards are high (and that's saying something).

The language is clean.
The sexual references are handled well (Thank You).
No extreme violence or any other vile content.

Other authors should take lessons from you when it comes to mature themes. I hope this review brightens your day. God bless.

Data Seeker

My first Chaise/Wuya fic. It's really good!

loooooooooooool. Poor Wuya. Doesn't she know that Chase is a rare breed of man that doesn't let his... erm... buddy control him? :3 Lots of love for you, my dear friend. You certainly helped me cheer up after writing a very angst-filled fic. It was really well written and I was amused with her shenanigans.