| Reviews for Kami's Son |
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| monsterkillers124 chapter 1 . 10/21 you seem to be a inactive author for some time |
| Fanficlover2017 chapter 6 . 9/2 Your story is good but as you say your comprehension of the English language sucks. You need to update but you also need a good beta to help with a rewrite and any future stories you release. |
| chapter 2 . 5/27 God damn learn some English mate |
| my 2 guys chapter 6 . 4/8 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| chapter 3 . 1/9 I hope you forget about writing. This is completely unreadable. The grammar is at best 5th grade level, the only decent thing is the spelling is good, but that is only from spell check. Sorry but sometimes brutal honesty is for the best. |
| HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 4 . 11/29/2017 Nope. |
| Brother Of Void chapter 5 . 11/15/2017 Nothingess: Minato I am way more stronger that what you believe to be the 'Original God'. I WILL Kill your villiage. |
| chapter 5 . 6/7/2017 more please |
| chapter 6 . 3/30/2017 Dude/dudet where is the next chapter? |
| HadoFoxGodAsashi chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 Fuck off and stop butchering my language asshole. |
| chapter 2 . 3/13/2017 Xdxfxddddxddxddgdddddddydgddddddghdgdddgdgdgddggddudddxdddddjddxddcdgddddddddddxfdxfdgxdgxddddgxdddxddfddddddddgddddddddgddddddxdfdxddffgddddddd |
| Monster King chapter 6 . 3/7/2017 Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it so early in the story. |
| arinasution5 chapter 6 . 11/8/2016 G |
| chapter 6 . 7/1/2016 Update |
| chapter 1 . 4/30/2016 Crammed needs work all in all love it |