the note at the end was really interesting to read and dissect, because it's true. What is redemption truly and how does it feel like personally compared to what others see?
Loved the story, too.

This is amazing! But one thing I would’ve thought Loki would’ve done; I thought whenever someone would ask to help them cross he would’ve used his magic to fly them to the other side or teleport with them across. Surprised he actually walked across with them, not so much he kinda ignored them...but it was kind of Loki to actually go through with it all. :)

I am pretty sure Loki is younger than Thor, because is human age Loki's only 17, so I think Thor might be in his early 20s.

Yes! Finally someone didn't mix the movie with the myth! Thank god! Awesome story!

Thor is so adorable! :D

I don't know if it's just me but Loki reminds me of a marginally more active and massively more petulant Revan.

It's a good story, but I feel like he hasn't changed much. Still very entertaining, although next time it would be good to show a large amount of improvement rather than little bits here and there. Keep jt up!

OMG their conversation is so ridiculous its amazing! They keep getting side tracked by correcting each other that lol just goes to show how cracktastic it is.

Oh dear Loki, you made him Neji.

I enjoyed reading it. Adorable and not angsty (we already have much of those though there are nice ones too). My only regret is not seeing Tony and Loki engaged in a drinking contest.
Cheers!

Love the story!

This was really good :-) I loved Loki! :-) I would love to read a sequal where Loki helps Thor and their friends with these adventures and maybe a battle, where Loki will be met with a choice to go back to his 'evil' self or choose to listen to Thor and not kill everyone that are monsters :-) and maybe with a beginning of love between Loki and Sif :-)
Good job! :-)

This was such a nice story, I really had fun reading it. I think it deserves more attention then it's getting. Thank you for writing this :)

I usually don't review till the last chapter, but I just had to say that this chapter was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing, even if I had already read about norse mythology it was still incredibly funny. So, good job :)

I absolutely love these skits with Tony and loki