this was great. you caught domon exactly.

Hehe, I saw that episode today. Yes. I swear I almost cried. I know! I was shocked, too. The first few times I saw it, I probably laughed. Hard.

Because it was funny. But man, it really IS creepy. Poor Chibodee. I like that Domon isn't angry/jealous in this 'fic. That he realizes and understands what Rain is doing (helping Chibodee), and not only is he not upset at her, he's not upset at Chibodee, either. And that's a good thing.

Great work.

Cheers,

-Manna

who cares if its short? i thought it was a really good episode and a really good fic!

Great story. I liked that episode, it's always somewhat "refreshing" to see Domon missing Rain. Anyway, great story.

Though I knew what was in Domon's head in that episode, I loved reading what you wrote about the way he was thinking. Good work!

That was a great story! Short and sweet! I hope you continue to write G-Gundam fics! They are the best!

That was interesting. very good. U must be a very devoted writer wake up in the middle of the night to wright that.

I think that this fic is good. But why don't you do some stuff where Rain and Chibidee are? Just a sugjestion, you don't really have to do just might just make the fic more interesting.I hope to see an update soon!

Aww! How cute! Oh, I just love brooding bishonen (aren't they fab?). Great job with Domon here. I do so love G Gundam...just never read any fanfic from it. I must really be desperate, reading G Gundam and all. I love it, and yet never remeber it's here! Thanks for a wonderful (if short, but sweet) read!

here i am again! i luv it! bravo!

I thought your story was pretty good and I hope you make a second chapter to build on the story a bit more.

wheeeeeeeeeeee! i like this fic alot!

How come my short fics writen at 5 A.M. are never this good? I liked this one, normaly you seem to write from Rain's P.O.V. but you definetly have Domon's caractor down. But you are right, you should try to write something longer than a page.

Really cute. You know that's what domon was really thinking. I'm glad those two finally got together at the end of the series.

~Jade Kitten _~

*smiles* i love got domon's thoughts down good.