| Reviews for Rewritten |
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   joey91731 chapter 18 . 10/27 loved this story thank you for writing this |
| Mr. Blackwood chapter 18 . 10/5 Well I'm sure you've read enough comments about how amazing this story is and such, so I want to just say that I'm happy that I could read it. Thank you for writing this! :D |
| Kloness chapter 18 . 8/26 Beautiful story (I'm surprised you finished it! No one really does that with fics) |
| stylo1 chapter 1 . 8/20 pretty well written, only a few small gramma mistakes here and there. i am not a fan of time travel with constant flashbacks to the future, to me that simple doesnt matter its the here and now that counts. the whole relationship between naruto and mikoto felt so sudden and rushed that it was really weird, but you made up for this with their talks later on. they talked so much about the future in unsecured areas i dont believe zetsu didnt catch any of that he is not called the ultimate spy for nothing. i didnt really like the story but that just me, the epilogue was really crappy though |
| stylo1 chapter 7 . 8/19 i am not sure, but i think you got the time line all wrong. wasnt it obito or tobi that controlled yagura? |
| DevilGamer chapter 18 . 8/19 Best time travel fic ever read. |
| Arsenal chapter 16 . 8/5 This it's the first chapter i was disappointed by. He should already have a plan in place to combat Madara. For him to be caught unawares like that is not in line with everything else you've written thus far. |
| DocCBM chapter 18 . 8/6 Only a moron would call her a mary sue here ...don't listen to morons...its sometimes contagious...nice job. |
| Tal House chapter 18 . 7/31 Loved this! I hope everything is going well! |
| Reft chapter 17 . 7/4 great story thank you very much good read |
| RykOakwine chapter 1 . 6/27 I've written and posted an oc-centric 200k word story and my opinion is there's no Mary Sue in the final chapter. And furthermore, people who make the accusation tend to do so reflexively and thoughtlessly as soon as they see an OC who's powerful, important, or a protagonist. Why? Because they think they are saying something profound and observant. But they aren't. Hardly ever. Excellent story, btw. Much better than I expected and very well done for a lesser used time period and cast! |
| Anaelyssa chapter 18 . 5/22 It was a good read, thank you. |
| Marmot95 chapter 18 . 5/20 That was a wonderful story and while you are right, the epilogue in the first person was slightly hard to read, I don't think it was that bad to whine about slight mary-sue characteristics of a character who only appeared in the epilogue... |
| Ztk016 chapter 18 . 5/18 lmfao so damn triggered... what crawled up your ass eh? |
| CapriSunnyD chapter 1 . 5/17 Also, how is Tobi controlling Yagura already? Wouldn't he be younger than 10 at this point and without his sharingan? |