truly beautiful, it's really well written and presented

How sad. No mater how hard he try's goku still hurts chichi.

I love this. At first, when I read the summary I assumed it would be from Vegeta's POV. I was pleasantly surprised that it was Goku's! I love seeing this side of him, something that is deeper than his constant happy-go-lucky self. This is a fabulous piece of writing. It flows very well, and the way you describe his feelings are so visceral. Love it, love it, love it!

Interesting story. I don't normally read yaoi-type fics but the summary got me intrigued.

I'm a G/CC fan mainly so I was automatically interested in finding out.

I actually thought this story was pretty interesting in that you didn't go the usual route of bashing ChiChi or killing her off. The fact that he feels so guilty and horribly about it and that he still loves his wife and finds her attractive still is a nice touch. It's so much different than most fics with the G/V pairing.

As for me, the fic made me think. It made me think about what it would be like to be in that sort of situation. To be the wife in that situation. It's very sad. Although I doubt it'd be the case in canon DBZ seeing as how all the women seemed to be doing fine. xD

But that's the beauty of fanfics. To explore other areas unseen.

The ending too it made me feel sorry for the both of them.

Anyways, nicely done. :D

Great story, very sad I love it!

I loved it. Very interesting. Its been awhile since I've read a story based on the saiyan sexually frustrations with their human mates. I didn't noticed if this was a one-shot or was going to be continued. But either way I'm happy. It was a great read. Thank you.