WELL DONE! Why fricken terrifying? You declared it "M", so everybody who read this knew what to find in this story. I found it okay, written well, never embarrassing. You are a great write, so: go on!

Oh. My. God. I have been searching for something like this for so long. Many other authors have trouble getting across the pure emotion and lust of the moment, but you certainly have no such trouble. I'm cutting this review short because I need a cold shower! Omg that was incredible

Welcome to that special Hell! Love your writing. Not as smutty as it is erotic. Something only true lovers can appreciate. Good job!

omfg unghh!

You did an amazing job with this story, it definitely feels like something they would do when the screen goes black :)

This kind of smut fic is new, at least this is the first one this site, that I've ever seen, for the fandoms of mine at least.

But on my goodness, that was hot and this is your first smut fic? I'd never known that, if you hadn't said that in the authors note. You did a magnificent job with it though.

Why hide? This was absolutely amazing. And beyond hot. So, I'd say your objective was achieved. :)

You've never written smut before? But... How?

I mean, that was really good, and not many people can write smut like that, even if they've written lots of it before.

Well done, and I hope you write more! :)

Just found this one and I think you did a great job with it.
VERY HOT!
Thanks.
Gloria

So...
Life has been chaotic and I haven't had time, nor privacy for smut in forever
I decided to give it a go again. Check this seemingly not so smutty smut because it was your firat time and all...

Bad idea!
I just had (still havjng) an asthma attack!
Not even kidding here
I never had one during smut, usually just after a marathon or sth

So... (and I'm sorry thiswas so crapily short but I'm on the phone) CONGRATULATIONS! :-D
AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING YOUR WORK WITH US! :-D

Wow, really hot. Very well written. Youre really good in writing smut. Keep on.

Oh my... this was definitely smutty smut... but it was very well written and your explanations for their actions made perfect sense. I love that Kate confessed she didn't like her fingers anywhere near as much as she does his... (I just don't know if I can agree with any guy though enjoying tasting himself on his woman)

That being said, this was certainly H-O-T and there's no reason to hide, lol.

Holly mother... This was so freaking hot! Speechless.

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT! Written in the style I'm not used to but it was still a great read!