| Reviews for Wine Angels |
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Bad Touch Magical Girls chapter 13 . 6/2/2014 I was going to kill someone when Grey said Sebastian was dead. Really good story though! (Shameless self promotion: Check out my stories.) |
Demon's Macabre chapter 13 . 3/26/2014 I love claude/Sebastian fluff. Ahh! Sooooooo hot and cuddly ! I love your writing! |
sapharra chapter 13 . 7/19/2013 wow. that was one of the best stories ive ever read, no joke. so very beautifully written, and the characters were done so well. i really love someone who can keep you guessing and totally scare the crap out of someone, and you did. you played off the "death" scene so well, and at first, in the very beggining of the story i thought, "hmm, is he dead? no, they talked about him in present tense. maybe hospital, cause hes not here and claude was thinkig about blood." then later, i freaked out. i still held on to the hope of him still being alive, but how you did it was something i would never have even imagined in my wildest dreams. wow, just wow. many kudos to you! here: watch?v-oCCnxBos10 this fits them unbelievably well. |
Zero176085 chapter 13 . 6/7/2013 This is the first Sebastian/Claude story I've read. And I must say that I'm thoroughly impressed! There are times in which I like to try reading about different pairings that I would normally not consider. And amongst those times the first story that I read on the new pairing is utterly distasteful, and it ruins the way I view the pairing. I'm very happy to say that that is not the case here. The plot was immediately captivating and it held my interest. The interaction between the characters was perfection. I absolutely love the way Sebastian and Claude teased eachother and had competitions but also had them be passionate and loving towards eachother. It was the perfect mix. I believe that you kept well to there personalities that are presented in the manga and anime. It is an remarkable accomplishment. Considering that it is something that I struggle with greatly. Your writing style is truly lovely. You didn't use a great deal of complicated words, but your grammar and spelling seemed to lack very little if anything at all. All in all, this has been a very entertaining read. I will look forward to reading what you post in the. future. And your story has been a great start to my Sebastian/Claude exploration. Alright. Now that I'm done being serious. It's time to bring out my inner fan-girl! :D I totally love that last scene! So sexy! *squeal* They make such a good couple! Though I feel really bad for them. They sure had to suffer through a lot. *balling eyes out* But they're together in the end so I'm happy! :D Ahem. Getting fan-girl back under control. Thank you for posting such an enjoyable fict! I hope to be reading more from you soon! Take care! -Zero |
onenightstandwithgrell chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Sorry to disturb you dear but there are some lagistical errors in this chapter. I am about a fourth of the way down and claude was called to the stand. Well you see dear , you called claude the defendent. He would not be the defendent as the defendent is the one who is being accused. He would be the plaintiff. I love the story so far, that little mistake was just bothering me. Have a good day love! |
woooimmafox1305 chapter 11 . 2/20/2013 ...*crying in emo coner* |
CrossAcademy22 chapter 13 . 12/17/2012 I finally got to reading Wine Angels! I've been so wrapped up in As a Rule that I decided to wait until it ended :D and now that it has ended, I was able to read this one Once again, I applaud you for the VERY well written plot [and I shamefully cried in a few chapters too TT_TT] Happy early Christmas and I am waiting for more of your fics! :) |
Motaku1235 chapter 13 . 12/15/2012 I LOVED THIS! It was amazing literary work, I mean, I didn't realize there was no Ciel until the chapter where Elizabeth was mentioned because the story was so well put together! I loved how it was somewhat realistuc and how Undertaker and everyone remained in character the entire time! (one of the longest reviews I've writtwn. Gasp! There was no Grell either! Wow! But I loved Bard in that one scene with Tanaka, he was like Seb's guardian there. (Tanaka as the bad guy. 0.o) |
nilili chapter 13 . 11/6/2012 I was following this story since the beginning and I enjoyed every part of it immenesily! It was exciting and mysterious and I'm a huge fan of how you portrayed the Undertaker. He was just the perfect king of freak with really witty and sharp mind and bold ideas. I'd love to read more about him;p This last chapter was so sensual, I could feel the pheromones and tender love seeping through my monitor while reading about their bed scene! |
Migoto Nami chapter 13 . 10/29/2012 Noooo! It's over! T.T Now what am I gonna look forward to every weekend? lol But all good things must end sometime right? Omg, this ending was perfect though! So cute -w- I very much enjoyed what you did here; them moving to England, building a restaurant, the trial being resolved in their favor...Grey dying(Hallelujah! That was the best part!) I loved what you did with Victoria XD I don't know if you were intending for her to be the Queen Victoria from the Kuroshitsuji manga, but that's what I pictured her as anyways XD Such a sweet old lady! And I thought Crumpet was her husband at first XD I was like 'That's a weird name for an old dude 0.o' but it's her cat lol! That's a cute name -w- Good choice! I thought it was very realistic for Sebastian to still have scars and be underweight from that whole ordeal. Everything's not just going to go back to the way it was overnight. It takes time -w- And I died when I read about Lizzy being his therapist! XD That was actually something that I could see her doing if she lived in our time. She's such a happy person and she would probably love helping people talk through their problems :] The smexy scene was precious and I loved their witty foreplay at the beginning :] That's their true personality from Kuroshitsuji and I loved that you kept them in character the best you could during this story. It's not easy in AU stories and a lot of people don't really understand that you can't always have the characters give perfect reactions to something when you yourself don't know how they will react. But I thought you did a crackerjack job regardless :] The actual sex scene had me in tears. I'm not gonna lie. They finally got together and are happy! EEeee! That's so awesome! Twas the perfect way to end this. Claude kept his promise too -w- Aw, that was adorable. I'm glad that they love each other and are happy :] It was wonderful to read! Throughout this entire chapter, I kept remembering the little moments from throughout the story. How they met, how they got together, their first kiss etc. Claude and Sebastian have really come a long way! And I'm absolutely elated that they got their happy ending -w- They deserve it! Definitely! The ending was gorgeous and it left me completely satisfied! I did not feel one drop of sadness at the end. I felt you covered everything and there was nothing left to say. That's very hard to accomplish, at least from my experiences. I always feel like the author could say something or I could write more with my own stories. But I didn't feel that way at all from this ending. It is true that I would have liked to see Sebastian take the stand for a little while, but I felt you did an outstanding job ending this fic without it and I understand why you left it out :] You really have a gift for writing, hun, and I'm glad that you're sharing it with us :] You are truly one of my favorite authors on this site(which is saying a lot cuz I only have 3 of them, well actually it's more like 2 cuz one is my friend XD) You're just that good! I can't help loving your work -w- There is some things though that I would like to point out to you. The problem is a little small, but I feel that it would help your writing if you fixed this, so let me take an example paragraph: "Claude ran a hand through his hair and walked towards the couch. He brushed a stray lock from Sebastian's face, admiring the soft, unguarded look on Sebastian's features. It told Claude that Sebastian was in a peaceful sleep, away from the occasional nightmare that plagued him. Fingers traced over the dark smudges under Sebastian's eyes before they pulled away." Honey...you said 'Sebastian' in that small paragraph four times XD That's what I've been noticing throughout your writing, you keep repeating the characters names multiple times. You don't need to say Sebastian's name so much, try using a synonym like 'the raven' or 'the younger male' or something else along those lines. I'm guessing that it's a pain to write his name so much so I'm just giving you a friendly tip :]...don't shoot me, I'm trying to be helpful D: Anyways this was a wonderful story and I can not express in words how much I loved it. Whenever it was updated, I would lol, dance a little bit, and go and read it immediately. I haven't had a fic that I've loved that strongly in a long while and now it shall forever be saved in my favorites -w- Thank you for sharing such an awesome story with us :] I can't wait to see what else you share with us :] So, til then, ja! Migoto Nami |
ClosetGoth chapter 13 . 10/29/2012 Ah! I'm on my phone so this review will be short, sorry. But ah! I loved this fic so much! Each chapter, from the opening court scenes to the resolution, just got better and better. It kept sucking me in, I couldn't wait to read each such a happy ending! Thank you for writing this . |
Steampunk Kimono chapter 13 . 10/28/2012 I'm disappointed that this was the end of the story, but all good things must come to an end, I suppose (besides the love that Sebastian and Claude share, of course). This was a really wonderful chapter. It was so great to see what had happened to the two and you conveyed so much emotion in this chapter. This story has actually changed my life. I've been going through some really hard times and this story helped me get through it. Now I believe that someday I'll find someone who truly loves me as much as Sebastian and Claude love each other. I send all of my love and thanks to you for writing the best fanfic I have ever read. -Steampunk Kimono |
Red Cookies chapter 13 . 10/28/2012 What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story! Oh, Sebastian...you silly goose! Getting all doubtful like that. But it's natural after all, especially after everything. Soot will help! And Claude, oh my, getting topped /blush. What a lovely relationship (and what I mean by that is, they have no qualms over who's top or bottom; it's welcomed pleasure and intimacy!) Of course, the detailed part was Sebastian finally getting what he wants! So much fluff...my head, it feels pink and soft as cotton now. Those I love you's, I could feel them right here -presses at chest-. And I love that Victoria version XD. Great chapter and again, great story! |
StrangeDays chapter 13 . 10/28/2012 This was a wonderfully-written ending to an awesome story. Great job! :) :) |