Loved it! Just wish (Personally) there had been one more chapter, just one.

For the possible sequel, could be when chuck was ringing Sarah. She thought that he was ringing for the date, but he was ringing to say fulcrum or the ring was after him. She obviously ignored his call so she could get laid by casey, then chuck finds out what happened after they rescue him. Multiple possibilities for a sequel.

Struggling to work out where In the timeline this is. Are chuck and Sarah a couple already? If so cheating with casey is wrong. Casey only became a colonel at the end of the 2nd season, so Was this just before Prague?

Potential for a sequel to this where chuck finds out and doesn't trust his handlers from then on.

Good

I enjoyed this and thought you did an excellent job with the love scene. Thanks for taking the time to write and share this.

There were quite a few grammatical errors that distracted and pulled me out of the story. If you use a beta and fix these problems, your readers can better focus on the sexy story you've worked so hard on. Perhaps you can do some editing and repost this? It's good, it just needs some revisions.

Brilliant, you should definitely do a Chuck and Alex one!

Its beautifully written as a sex scene. There is just that ickines that its Casey and Sarah. He just somehow seems more like father/mentor figure to Sarah and to Chuck than a lover. And then there's that she's in love with Chuck, so she strings him along but screws Casey it just somehow doesn't seem fair to anyone. I understand that they are human and have needs and if she can't have Chuck then John seems like a safe substitute. But it almost feels that it would be better if it was some total stranger she picked up in a bar and later discarded like a used tampon.

Nice . You did do well. Let's be adults here. We sometimes sleep with people when we love someone else. We fool ourselves at times. Chuck and Sarah were no different in canon and in your world, Casey and Sarah are not either . It's all good when you're honest about it.