| Reviews for The Foundling |
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bobbyneko chapter 4 . 8/29/2015 whoa~ |
ClearMortality chapter 4 . 3/3/2014 So Kurogane's actually a demon. What an interesting turn of events! I'd really love to read more soon :-) |
D chapter 4 . 9/18/2013 Update this story! Please! |
wilkiswilk chapter 4 . 9/2/2013 What a fascinating idea... I adore your KuroFai fics to death. KuroFai's an OTP of mine though I didn't look closely at fanfic until recently. The Wizards of Ceres just took my breath away, and now I'm on a quest to read all the other fanfics you've written for Tsubasa. What can I say, your characterization is spot-on, your descriptions are fantastic, and the plot! Goodness, the plot. It's been a long time since I've seen an author who can make as great a plot as you. ...So I shall wait for this to be updated, and go read your other Tsubasa fics in the meantime! Thank you for writing such lovely fics! |
Eye.G chapter 4 . 2/17/2013 I hope you will never stop writing Kuro/Fai stories. You have such a powerful imagination and amazing talent to capture their characters and emotions. Please keep it up! |
Nightrose1 chapter 4 . 12/6/2012 This is an interesting story please keep writing it. |
pleaseforgetthisaccount chapter 4 . 10/5/2012 I look forward to your continuation of this story! It's very interesting. |
lemon-and-chai chapter 4 . 9/5/2012 ANOTHER fantastic AU! -cries- The concept... BRILLIANT! (I always thought it was funny how the Japanese guy was so huge and so much taller and buffer than the European ahahahahaha not that I don't love it that way...) And now I want more of this on top of all your other stories... |
yumeniai chapter 4 . 8/21/2012 I love the style this is written in, the disjointed timelines eventually coming together to form a coherent whole ... and I love the plot too, and how different it is to ... well, everything! By doing this you're giving so much more meaning to everything, like Tomoyo sending out Kurogane ... it wasn't just to teach him true strength, but also humanity ... and everything just fits so well! This is so well done ... really hope you continue it after you're finished with your challenge! |
TheEndofTag chapter 4 . 8/20/2012 OMG! I sooo do not know that you have a new story out! And omg! It is soooooooo good and intense. This just totally blew my mind! I was sooo not expecting this: Kurogane is not human but a demon. :O And the real Kurogane is alive! It makes sooo much sense. Totally explain Kurogane's thirst for blood and his ruby eyes. I guess in a weird sort of way, Kurogane will no longer have to worry about getting a wife and hurting Fai. *gets shot for being sooo inconsiderate of Kurogane's life falling apart* Ah that just reminds of that one scene where it says THEN and Kurogane was all like "you knew" to Fai. Soooooo I guess Fai knew from the begining that Kurogane is not human but a demon. I reread that part when I knew what he is referring to and damn it just broke my heart more to finally understand the situation and the tone of that scene. Kurogane feel so defeated and tired out. Ah my poor Kuro-boo! but at least Fai loves Kurogane no matter what! I am still hoping that Fai will still be Kurogane's anchor to keep him there with them. Kyaaaa! I am soooooo excited about this story! So please please please update soon! |
Iaveina chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 Interesting story! :D |
Cloverfield chapter 4 . 8/15/2012 Oh god oh god oh god oh god I thought this was this fic. I thought it was and now I *know*. (Uh, you might remember chatting to me about this once and me basically hyperventilating with excitement in your direction because it was such a brilliant idea and you're such an amazing writing I just knew it was gonna be GOOD.) I disappear into the depths of the wilderness for a few days and you update twice and it is incredible and basically the greatest thing ever to come back online to. DAMMIT MIKKE STOP GIVING ME FEELS, OK? (Never, ever stop. Please.) akdhlgfjd;sgjf Kuro-demon, you're hurting and it's enthralling and I feel bad for you but I wanna read more and I just know you'll suffer (come on, this is mikkefic; it's not right if someone isn't in pain or set on fire) but it will be written so beautifully You're incredible, seriously. |
sapphireswimming chapter 4 . 8/14/2012 My goodness. Despite the title and whispers of "mother" and "son", I was not expecting this. This is such an incredible plot twist for Kurogane's life to have taken, yet with his eye color and thirst for fighting that you pointed out here, it makes so much sense. That's one of the things I absolutely love about your writing, all of your stories. You are able to take bits and pieces and descriptions and details and then transform them into such intricate and well developed plots of their own. I just can't ever get enough of your writing! And I am really enjoying the then, now, and soon format you've taken up here. I've never seen anything like that done before and it keeps everything really interesting as the readers piece together what's happening and what has happened and how it fits together. Sapphireswimming |
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 8/13/2012 Good two chapters |
LightAngelHiroko chapter 4 . 8/12/2012 Whoooa! I was not expecting that! What an amazing idea! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |