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   AgentKalGibbs chapter 1 . 6/20 Oh this is just beautiful! I love it so much! |
| kikki hope chapter 1 . 9/18/2016 ) |
| Hopping Mad - Chrissy chapter 1 . 6/7/2015 Lovely! |
| weezer42 chapter 1 . 3/14/2015 beautifully observed and relayed...nicely done, thank you |
| mebfeath chapter 1 . 5/18/2014 Aww, lovely. Very cute. :) |
| connyx chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 *thumbs up* - you did very well :) |
| Athena13 chapter 1 . 11/9/2012 Very nice wrap up. |
| Gen Varel chapter 1 . 9/13/2012 Beautiful and moving, as always. Still love reading your Sam and Jack stories. Please, never stop! |
| PatriciaS chapter 1 . 8/13/2012 Like the way you've thought this one through and the points you've picked out. Their first possible sightings are good and feel possible. Thanks for sharing. |
| Aveo amacus chapter 1 . 8/10/2012 Great story Rachel! I hope RL is getting a bit easier for you, not to meantion happy ship day! (even if I'm two weeks late) Aveo |
| sg1star chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 lovely story, well written and sums up what should of happened |
| Kaytee33 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012 very nice job. I especially like how you tackled the force field from both povs. |
| malson72 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012 I love it! |
| thorbuddy chapter 1 . 8/4/2012 Cool! |
| megmeyer chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 I was so happy to see another story from you! And of course, you did not disappoint! Well done - as all your stories are. Loved the little insights. Thanks, as always for writing such great stories! |