Oh my goodness gracious I have no idea how old this is but holy guacamole man that was one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read! And I read a lot of good books! Seriously though, write. A. Book!

Wow. You have a way with words. I normally don't care for first person POV but this is... wow. Love it.

Oh god! This is so amazingly passionate I love it!

Oh you are building this up quite nicely... I'm so excited to keep reading!

You write so well! Love the interweaving canon. This line made me laugh "Just because all I am thinking about is shagging Ron doesn't mean that everyone else is too."!

Wowsers this first chapter was amazing!

I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Third time reading this. I wish I could write as poetically as you!

This is such a well written piece, you had me on edge the whole way through!
You really built up the tension incredibly and the ending was lovely. Great piece!

I love how you included moments of teasing as well, so you can also imagine it being something that lasts beyond.

Truly such a wonderful story.

Such a beautiful story. Well written

Your fanfic is so intense, I really really liked it

Happy birthday hermione ure a great actor as great as this book I like it a lot

Oh my god. That was one of the most intense things I have ever read. I'm still bowled over by it.
I actually read the first chapter years ago, but thought it was just a one shot so never checked back. I didn't realise there was a whole erotic saga!
Just - wow. Some things seem like they should be clichéd, over the top, but somehow it all works. It's beautiful. I am in awe.

Amazingly written story! Your skill as an authour is immense!

Loved it well written