It should be longer its very funny :)

I so love this

I'm trying to catch up on a lot of fanfics I missed out on and really not leaving a lot of reviews since I'm so late to the game but I just had to comment on this one.

TOTALLY HILARIOUS!

I was so not expecting Jim-maybe Martha or Alexis but not Jim. And Beckett's "Daddy?" was utterly fantastic. And then to get the reveal of the "20 minutes earlier" priceless!

Really funny

Omg, that is GROSS! :D

Crazy but I kinda love it.

I wanna die from the embarrassment! Hahaha Oh god...! Too funny!

I L-O-V-E the idea of Jim and Martha. They deserve a life, too. There is not a better cast of characters on TV. So I think it is possible to have fun with other couples. I have kids the age of Nathan and Stana. It really creeps them out to know I think Nathan (Castle) is hot. They both have the greatest sense of humor. You will need to write fast! I read fast and get bored easily.

LOL Castle's mom Beckett's dad coitus interruptus :P

Funny!

This was so much fun!

Even though I don't ship the other couple either, I really enjoyed it!

- Aline

This is very very good!

Oh my God, so hilarious!

This was amazing. And hilarious. Have you thought about continuing the story with the two relationships? I don't ship Jim and Martha, but you made it funny and I'd love more of this!

Wonderful! Very cute, hilarious fic! I always love reading fanfics that explore a relationship between Martha and Jim.