Reviews for The Perils of Innocence
Jostanos chapter 33 . 23h
I have a feeling that 'Bad Faith' is going to attempt to 'capture' harry to 'bring him to a better household', but I have been known to be wrong with my guesses before do. *shrugs*

*sighs* Sooner or later Lucius and Draco are going to learn first hand that the Mundane, or 'Muggles' as they like to call them, are far more dangerous and inventive than they thought.
Jostanos chapter 16 . 10/28
*chuckles* It is nice to know that they have more schools to choose from if they, Like Kevin, would rather go to one of them instead of going to Hogwarts. :)
Jostanos chapter 15 . 10/28
I was wrong about the number of chapters left for me to read in a previous review.. *sighs* That number doesn't really matter anyway. What does matter, however, is that Dean Thomas' Father has been named: Alexander Demirci!

Still... I wonder who he may have been in the Canon version of events?
Jostanos chapter 13 . 10/28
I have a feeling that a certain White Bee (Dumbledore) may try to put Harry back with the Zoo that abandoned him at Esperanca House 6 years ago.

*shrugs* I still have about 10 more chapters to read so my guess may or may not be accurate.
Jostanos chapter 5 . 10/28
A flashback to when was "living" with that Zoo perhaps?
Jostanos chapter 4 . 10/28
In my opinion Hermione should stay with Harry instead of going beck to her Parents house.
Sure she may miss them, and she would like to go back to them, eventually, but it would be better for Hermione to be where she would not only be appreciated, but also loved by a kindred spirit. :)
monbade chapter 33 . 10/23
more please
Guest chapter 33 . 10/13
I love this story and hope you can update soon.
AzrielG chapter 33 . 10/11
I really love the detailed backstory you've set up here, the focus on pre-hogwarts is actually pretty refreshing as many authors skip this part completely. Looking forward to seeing where this goes, Harry Potter with the assistance of people that actually care and with the therapy he really needs will be another breath of fresh air amongst all the angsty powerful Harry's or even Canon Harry who really needed the emotional support here.
PermanentPicture chapter 33 . 10/2
I don't usually read stories with a K rating, but the premise was intriguing. This is really good, charming, actually. I hope that you are able to continue it someday.
Lynneth chapter 33 . 9/24
I do hope you find the time to update this again at some point. Best of luck with everything, though, even if you don't.
The Jabberwock of OZ chapter 33 . 9/24
Heheheh
I am REALLY liking this story man. So I just read all the chapters and i Gotta say; Excellent work man.

So really the first thing i notice IS the picture you chose, and it makes me think of an old movie about two children learning 'something' and i was thinking that if the guys who made Ghost with Patrick Swayze made a movie about The children's time in the facility; the picture you chose would be part of the marketing.

STORY WISE This is fraking amazing. The children are learning magic by controlling accidental magic, and learning through feelings and experiences how magic works to them, and their explanations on HOW magic feels to them is interesting too. Seeing how people react to HOW magic affects the world is so...like WE wouldn't think its strange, because WE have not seen a plate break and get repaired, but that might really scare people.

I hope to read more whenever more comes out man.
See you out there.
Alifromfl chapter 33 . 9/20
I love this story. I hope someday you come back to finish it.
broken5pieces chapter 33 . 9/19
Aww too bad we can't experience d hold ourselves.
broken5pieces chapter 17 . 9/18
"You mean Muggle clothes? Why would you want to?" She pointed at Hermione's jeans. "Those things look so uncomfortable!"

Lol I feel the same way dear.
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