Delicious, and really well-written! :D

Wow this was great! I loved it! I think you nailed Balthier's sensuality perfectly, and Vaan's childish yet precocious nature made me laugh. I also liked that it's not the typical seme-uke scenario which is often the case when it comes to these two. And to top it off the progress is slow and sensual, something that I absolutely love. Great job and I hope you continue this, I'm eager to read more! _

WHAT? You ended it up like this :(
It's been three years so I can't ask for the rest.. I'm so disappointed :(
But that was really good! Thanks for the story!

Very much enjoying this so far! I look forward to the next installment 83 Keep it up Ari x

Mwahaha drunk Vaan has Balthier in the palm of his hands. :)
Its nice to see Vaan in control for once and I thought this was really cute and hot! Hope to read more for you!