Well, that was snappy! :) It's crazy how you wrote this and now Neal's angry at Peter after the newest episode. If you add to it I'm sure I'd be able to give you more feedback. Great start if it's a start... haha

Have to say I agree with Neal. Diana and Clinton put up with him so that they can be on Peter's team. They may have moments where they appreciate the 'expertise' that Neal brings to the table but on the whole they go out of their way to make certain that Neal knows that he's there on Peter's say-so, not theirs. The one that particularly annoys me is Clinton. Neal risked his life to save Clinton's friend, hell he risked his life to save Clinton and yet Clinton acts like he's superior and that Neal is just a felon on work release most of the time.

Actually, I agree with you. In fact I kind of have a feeling that Diana might possibly be the one pulling a con on Peter. Jones thinks of Neal as a friend who gets into trouble. He would not like the idea of sending Neal back to prison but he'd do it if he felt Neal deserved it. However he would not activily act against Neal.

Diana on the other hand, I think there's more going on there.

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I think they like him just don' wnto be too obvious about it

I think yes, but they don't like the idea of him risking Peter's career. And they have sense enough to know he can't always be trusted to do things by the book.

Whoa, I really liked the beginning and then it just ended super abruptly. Maybe write a bit more, perhaps Peter's response, and let it end naturally?