Reviews for The World In His Eyes
Captain Pi chapter 1 . 11/29/2017
Nice. Sherlock is ok I guess... But Watson RULES!
Dina C chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
This piece is a brilliant mix of LOL hilarious and stomach-twisting sexy. I've re-read it several times. Favoriting.
ImpudentGuttersnipe chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
Holy hell, hotness!
Wasn't Depeche Mode required listening for *everybody's* first same-sex make out in the late 80's/early 90's?
Nimgartiel chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
Hello,

I just finished this story and I liked it, this is just sweet )
I was wondering if you would allow me to translate this into french?
I've read the "No heart for me like yours" and it was so gorgeous, incredible and wonderfull that I would have died in delight if I only had the chance to translate it but it already exists in french so now, I ask for this one, because it's very pleasant to read )
GoldenEyes chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Fantastic! I love how you got them out of there regular clothes and into clubbing ones. That's something they should definitely do. It'd be a nice change. And then the line of "It's always something!" is fantastic! I loved it! And the sensuality of the whole thing is fantastic. I loved it. Thank you for sharing this. Terrific job and great wishes! :-)
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
*dead on the floor* For the first time EVER, I think I'm glad the lemon wasn't written out - don't think my ovaries could've taken it.
Cullenboyz chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Wasn't this just what I needed tonight?! You are so adept at taking us from what we know of the television series and leading us into your world of what may be. It's truly wonderful. And as much as I hate to even mention it, it's refreshing that you are unusually good a writing, in English.
MapleleafCameo chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
Hee hee hee!
Some memorable lines & awesome images!
'If I'm on the arm of a fit army bloke, I can focus my attention where it needs to be'
Followed up by 'There's an extra strut to John's step as they approach the door to Barcode. Sherlock hides his smirk.'
And I love John's slip up 'First time I made out with a bloke was to this song. God, it takes me back."
Sherlock is absolutely still.
"Pardon?"
Shit. Maybe I shouldn't have had that second cocktail, John thinks.' Lololol!
Awesome - very sexy!
Misty Neumiller chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
Oh god yes...
jbug chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Read it early this morning. Great way to really wake up. Loved it.
Rairakku1234 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
"This is practically the uniform for Barcode," he says, then adds with a smirk, "In fact, I'm not sure it's quite tight enough, really."
"Well, if it gets any tighter, I'll look like an angry Bruce Banner," John mutters.
Sherlock's eyebrow arches quizzically. "Whom?"

Hahahahahahahaha. I love it when Sherlock misses cultural referances and Sherlock perhaps we like John in tight black shirts. hehehehehe :)

'Sherlock, as always, looks gorgeous, in a deep red silk shirt, mostly unbuttoned, and a pair of supple leather trousers. John nearly had a stroke when Sherlock first appeared in them. It's excruciatingly unfair, thinks John, to be head-over-heels for the world's most perceptive man, when his one blind spot seems to be his awareness of that fact.'

Loved it. Great UST.

'John is astounded. A date? Sherlock has made it abundantly clear from that first disastrous conversation at Angelo's that he's uninterested in dating. A "fit army bloke"? Even wrapped in a conceited (albeit truthful) assessment of his potential to attract crowds of admirers, Sherlock has never been so complimentary.
There's an extra strut to John's step as they approach the door to Barcode. Sherlock hides his smirk.'

Have I mentioned that I love Sherlock Backhand compliments, not to mention sneaky Sherlock is the greatest. hehehehe

'They work their way through the crowd in the front room, using Sherlock's near-magical ability to attract the instant attention of bartenders, cabbies and the like to obtain drinks from the packed bar along the left wall. As Sherlock predicted, John's dog tags and military bearing keep most of the admirers at bay, although one or two try to chat Sherlock up, and one chap young enough to be his son seems quite taken with John. Each time, John places a possessive arm around Sherlock's waist, and they retreat in defeat.'

Wonderful.

'John plays his part by standing close to Sherlock, talking to him and trying to look as into him as possible. This is no hardship – he couldn't be any more fascinated by Sherlock Holmes if he tried.'

Hahahahahahaha. Great Love it.

"John," he purrs, as he stares at John the way he stares at crime scenes. "You're bisexual."

Mmmmmmmmm... Sherlock Purring. hehehhe. Look out JOhn. :)

"These leather trousers are difficult to put on, but they are the very devil to remove. Might you be willing to lend a hand, Doctor Watson?"
"Oh, God, yes."

Hahahahahahaha.

Fantastic Job. This is one of my favorite tropes and you did a great job with it. (if you can't tell since I quoted almost the entire thing at you.) thanks so much for sharing.
Rairakku
daffidil chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
"I think it's high time we went home," rumbles Sherlock into John's ear, that rich baritone shooting straight from John's ear to his groin.

thats exactly what happens to me, whenever the man speaks...
thisisforyou chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Am loving the fact that of all the delicious images you put in my head with this, the one that sticks is Sherlock arching up from his bed trying to yank the leather pants up his legs.

Delightful, thanks very much.

-for you!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Oh God I played the sond while I read this and I couldn't agree more. I really like the story by the way.
firewordsparkler chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
:) :)
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