I'm so happy that you included all six of Loki's children.

This is amazing, kudos!

O.O... there any way this can continue? it's SO GOOD! :D D

I love you.
I could kiss you.
This is amazing. Just. Just. Arrrgggg!
I want more!

oooh, would love too see a continuation of this, this time in a more normal format.

loved this! :)

This definitely needs to be expanded on. I'd LOVE to see Odin and the others get their backsides handed to them by Loki's children.

Interesting take on Logan and Victor being Narfi and Vali (which is which though, that is the question?)

I really like this story.

Okay, really loved. Thanks for including Vali and Nari, and for their identities.

That was really nice, and excellently written. I enjoyed reading it.

This is one of the most heartwarming Loki and children tales I have read.
I especially loved how Pepper was Hela and Jormungandr was Tony. The other siblings were just was well chosen, but those two seemed to fit really well. Although I see that this has been marked complete, it would have been great to see how they would change the world and how the other Avengers would react to this revelation.
Anyway thanks for all your lovely Loki centric stories, they are fantastic!

This was very well done, and I really enjoyed it! I would LOVE to see this continued, even as just snippets instead of an actual plot.

ohh... freaking sweet

way cool.

You are wonderful and I love love love this. You have no idea how much I love this. And, I too would read a longer story based on this premise. :) Thank you for writing!